Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
It is not uncommon for someone to argue that it is of great necessity for students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country, as studying aboard for a period of time not only helps them to improve their language ability but also broaden their horizons. However, there are obviously some drawbacks to push all the students to study aboard. The first is that parents may not have enough money to afford the fees. In fact, I consider it is a good choice for students to go studying aboard for some time, but it is not necessary.
Studying in a foreign country becomes more and more popular among students nowadays. The reasons that counts for this phenomenon may be they hope to work in another country or just feel interested in other culture. Truthfully, there are many advantages for learning aboard. If they choose to study in a country which is completely different with their home country, they can adapt a new language as well as learn different customs and taste various food. Also, if they go to a well-developed country, they may meet people all over the world so that they have the chance to keep contact with different people which will benefit them to rich their insight into the world.
However, the premise for students to go aboard for at least one semester must take studying fees into account. It will become a burden for poor family if their kids are asked to study in a foreign country. To be worse, if all the students are required to go to study in a foreign country, the school as well as the educational institution should help the students by giving them scholarship, which will be bigger burden for the taxer in the country.
Although some people would argue that only when students have the experience to study aboard can they have a better education so that they can make more money in the future, studying aboard may not have relevance with higher salary. For one thing, students may be unfamiliar with the new environment , they may have difficulty to understand the textbook because of the totally different language, which will become an obstacle for them to get a good remarks. In addition, they would not be successful in their job even if they have the experience because to be a elite has many good qualities such as to be delicate and smart.
In conclusion, I disagree with the propose to require all students to study aboard, but it can be a good suggestion if some students would love to and their family has enough money to endorse their kids.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, as to, at least, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 443.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67268623025 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47347752447 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.431151241535 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.0 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8292893962 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.375 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6875 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 5.21951772744 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20169867638 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791902652993 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533910823176 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137070773416 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035835045803 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.