Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
I disagree with the broad assertion, that student should take at least one semester abroad as a compulsory task established by universities.
The first and major consern behind such dissension is, that not everyone can be benefit from learning in a foriegn counrty. Despite majority could grow by learning process in different enviroment by metting varied people, having a much broader ken, get potential chances for working in the countries they studied, and much more, it would have adverse effect on the monorities with physical diesase. If some students have to travel to a differnet country with a wheelchair, it can be disastrous for them to take care of themselves in the first several days when they did not know who and where they can get help from, given that they are totally not familar with this country. They may even get depression or other metal illness due to their helpless feeling and hart to interact with their peers. In such situitation, it could be a better alternative for them to stay in their homeland.
secondly, it would be unaffordable for some families with scarce income to support their childern to do so. For those people who is shakled by their stringent familiy financial condition, they can only opt to select a countries that with cheap living cost, whcih ususally to be a developing country if they have to. Then they are in an inferior position in comparision with those who can choose any place that is best for their development, and the policy, which require student to study abroad, will only exacerbate the inequality between the rich and the poor. Therefore it is not appropriate to set such policy as compulsory.
Lastly, It could be a infraction to the constituition since people has the freedom to choose what is best for them, as long as their choice will not harm the interest of the rest.
In conclusion, I would suggest that one compulsory exchange semester would be undue for above resaons. Instead, I would suggest the universities encourage students to take such one semestern study abroad. Furthermore, I would strongly suggest universities also provide proper guidence for those who intend to do so, and also some funding opportunities for those in poor financial condition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a country' or simply 'countries'?
Suggestion: a country; countries
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, at least, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 375.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.984 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73384190391 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554666666667 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6565456055 60.3974514979 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7857142857 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165206446196 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632616010403 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580064841706 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104970841447 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690455353963 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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