Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Nowadays, it is not uncommon that students in the United States do not have enough money to study in university. This leads to the missing of really good students, who could have succeeded in life. Because of this, I am convinced that university should be free to all admitted students that cannot afford the tuition.
If this policy was implemented, many people would be able to succeed in life, as university studies would be more accessible. For example, there are many cases, such as Bill Gates, that could not afford going to university, so they had to work in order to obtain enough money to study. If he had not been able to work to earn that money, he would not have been as crucial to technology development as he has been. This example can be applied to other people whose job has helped the develop of nowadays society.
However, in my opinion, if universities were funded by governments, they should be public and controlled by the state, as the money needed to guarantee a quality education would come from the pockets of all the American people. This would mean that no private foundation would earn benefits by educating people, because all the money invested in universities would come from people’s salaries.
Nevertheless, it should also be mentioned that offering free university education would mean to increase taxes, and rich people would have to pay a higher amount of money than poor ones. In this sense, it is plausible that the wealthiest do not support this measure, as it would mean that poorer people, who paid less taxes than them, would study for free, with scholarships based fundamentally upon their money. As the United States is a democracy, it is clear that they would vote for the candidate that establishes that the tuition should be paid by students in any case, so it may be difficult to pass a law that guarantees free education for them.
In conclusion, I am convinced that free university education for people who are admitted to universities but cannot pay the tuition should be guaranteed, in order to attain more equity and do not waste the intelligence of many people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 204, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to go'.
Suggestion: to go
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Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ed to other people whose job has helped the develop of nowadays society. However, in my ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in any case, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84931506849 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69062298637 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484931506849 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.498880152 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.153846154 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0769230769 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 5.21951772744 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202097819273 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871045937777 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756561840202 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143731431883 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683665770711 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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