Due to the complexity of our society, the scientific research is developing into everyarea with a great speed. There was set back on the way of scientfic hundreds years ago when some famous scientis were sentenced to death for the reanson of betraying the God. At present day, there will be no more tragedy like that again because of the people's view on science, which we are living upon.The scientific reasreach , however , should be restrictd at some proper extent in my opinion.
There are still lots of scientific fields where we haven't reached, and it could be dagnerous because nobody can tell the certainty of unknown. Clone technology is a very controversial area with human ethnic debates.Some optimistic people will crow becasuse of this invention as human can use it for many area like medical filed. If you suffer bad illness and need a transfer for liver or other oragnism which are rediculously expesinve now, you can copy the organism and let the doctor put inside your body, because of the origination of the organism is you, you can never worry about the repulse from you body to this new oganism tissue. On the other hand, some pessimistic people asseted that this technology violated the rule of human ethnic. In the future it could bring more trouble if this technology is widely used. They imagine the situation that one day you come back home from work, and your wife is cooking dinner for anther person with your appearance inside out. It is not just a tragedy for single familiy, it could be a globar disaster while they could make this kind of duplication.
As I concern, the story of clone technology bring the important role of the Government, in that the government must take control prior to the invetion of this kind of technology by the means of legislation. If the government do not take measures immediately, the whole human-beings would confront big disaster with the abuse of technology.
There is another reanson that the Government must make limitation for scientific reasearch because of the technoloy fraud. This kind of fruad is very frequent in China,because Chinese salary criterion of higheducation instituton is linked with the scientific output of the people. The government should reform this kind of criterion in order to clarify the phenomenon of scientific research.
In my opinion , in regular area, the Governmnet should give the scientific research a proper foucus without limitation. The phenomenon of scientific research could be never better now. Parents send their kids to school to get cultivaited, the scientists are highly admired by people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, while, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2180.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0462962963 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74201515554 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548611111111 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 685.8 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.639209034 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.111111111 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227488724433 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617026613535 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588355133899 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108851259987 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408465811582 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.