The great old historic buildings are very well know for the fame of their works done by great architecture. the issues states that for the modern development we should collapse old building to built new ones. But, as we know people are very excited to visit historic buildings because every historic buildings has it's own history and story. so i disagree with this issue and in order to build new modern development we don't have to collapse old buildings and remove their greatness in the history.
For an example we can take tajmahal, it was build by shajahan for the memory of her beautiful wife and for their love. many foreigners visit tajmahal for it's great architecture and view from river ganga. it's also one of the wonders among 7 wonders in the world. just because to develop our society we can't destruct it's reputation for modern developments. Like wisely, There are many building in this world which tells us a story and tells us our ancestors great works.
Another example, India is well known for it's richness when kings are ruling us and their great forts are known for many historic events and places where many wars took place for the greater good. If, these forts are demolished just because they are old and no one is ruling and managing the fort their greatness will be lost nothing will left to tell stories to our future generations. So, It is not a very good move to make just to show the we are developed by building it for modern purposes.
In the contrary, It is good to build to build buildings for modern purposes but, It shouldn't stand on the ground of the historic building. although, some might think old historic buildings are not useful because they are just empty walls. Most of the people think every old historic building has it's own story. those old historic buildings might be the memory of their ancestors and students learn a lot about the thinking of the old architectures the greatest well know history of the building.
The conclusion will be for the modern purposes modern developments shouldn't be build on the ground of historic buildings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1731.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74246575342 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43875631625 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468493150685 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 524.7 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9946318726 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.823529412 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.35294117647 5.21951772744 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389692590728 0.243740707755 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156258055866 0.0831039109588 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128981896487 0.0758088955206 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281989120143 0.150359130593 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136775097821 0.0667264976115 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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