The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them not by their contemporaries.
Many great people of the world had been lost as time progresses and many are not remembered though they had made a great impact on our society in the present. It is when a person's non-existence is widely respected or considered since the present will not be the same without them anymore. Therefore one's worth and reputation will proceed with time and boundaries when they are remembered even after their death and are cherished and celebrated to date.
This is usually the case because our human nature cannot determine or comprehend the importance of others unless they are gone forever or for a period of time. Most of us take everything for granted and the value of something and someone with respect to our view is variable and abstract. For instance, we consider gold to be a valuable material and it is because of the fact that it is a hard and enormous process to obtain gold in its pure form compared to aluminium or silicon we find abundant in the above surface soil. All though gold, aluminium and silicon are metals, we have different abstract values for each of them because of the process to obtain the metals in their useful form.
Similarly, a person's value is not fathomable because we cannot differentiate the pros and cons of oneself since everyone has different perspectives and moral values to judge upon. Unlike a metal's value which is decided by the process, it is obtained, a person's value differs from one set to another set people. For example, if a person dies, to the common crowd it is a normal death that awaits everyone else but to the people who have a close relation to the deceased, it will be devastating news. One cannot simply put a price on another's life because of the difference in each social reform.
On the other hand presently, great personalities are widely respected all around the world because of their achievement or the contribution of the general or the needy society. They are respected, praised and favoured by the crowd in the present day. This is in contrast that different people's worth is decided once they are deceased. A famous celebrity who also works for the charity's worth can be easily determined by others when compared to a normal person's activity when they are not dead.
In the end, everyone has a different importance to every other person they meet in their life and to judge one's worth on a common basis is not determinable. It is rather a vague idea that one's reputation to be judged of how long they are remembered after their death but it is the closest we could get in our own perspective.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
... our society in the present. It is when a persons non-existence is widely respected or co...
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Line 1, column 290, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...l not be the same without them anymore. Therefore ones worth and reputation will proceed ...
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Line 1, column 300, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...he same without them anymore. Therefore ones worth and reputation will proceed with ...
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Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...s unless they are gone forever or for a period of time. Most of us take everything for granted...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...old to be a valuable material and it is because of the fact that it is a hard and enormous process to ob...
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Line 3, column 525, Rule ID: ALLTHOUGH[2]
Message: Did you mean 'although'?
Suggestion: Although
...ind abundant in the above surface soil. All though gold, aluminium and silicon are metals,...
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Line 7, column 338, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrity'.
Suggestion: celebrity
...th is decided once they are deceased. A famous celebrity who also works for the charitys worth c...
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Line 7, column 454, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ned by others when compared to a normal persons activity when they are not dead. In ...
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Line 9, column 108, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...on they meet in their life and to judge ones worth on a common basis is not determin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in contrast, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2123.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 453.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68653421634 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59260786153 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470198675497 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 700.2 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9072181773 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.882352941 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6470588235 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135142338557 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440757843035 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343081686338 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814546502693 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335866103945 0.0667264976115 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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