In this real world, we know that there are certain things which have been changed newly than before, similarly increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more
problems than it solves.
As we know, this generation of the human race is dealing with artificial intelligence and all the technologies have been increased as well
as more flaws have been added up due to rising in technologies. Each particular person aims for his/her life to be a passionate one and resolve an issue or error
that comes under their way. For example,I can take as a role of a software engineer which is a good choice in my career, and also here, I face a lot of
competition and issues which is persistent that other employees who could not concede it are thrown out of a job, which might tend to lose their career indeed.
As we know that, in the software routine business there are possibilities where luck might favor in oneself to achieve a greater position to boost their salary
income. It is hard to reach until we prove what is best for the company requirements and financial status which will, in turn, provide you a promotion to the
next level. At first, we need to think that company is a place to survive for what's best to improve to jump to the next level, and seeing or overlooking others
in the company might degrade your work and will certainly push your confidence down. Various problems engender each day and we are the persons
who must use our skillset to hinder the obstacle? One particular example is that , when a truck driver categorize meticulous details and loads the goods into
the truck and he must make sure that nothing is missing which shouldn't make him ponder about his goods while driving on the road and which might drive into
accidents where he wasn't conscious about it.
To prescience, the future about our talent is not the way the judge the rapid pace of life. Each person has different abilities and solves the upcoming circumstances
in a different manner where one ploddingly has to learn his way to recognize his talent so as to equal the upcoming ones in nearby future. Mainly I refuse
to tell that person who seeks his true intentions to survive is hardly failing his talent. As he has to stand with his one leg to fight the enemies which is
recurring spontaneously, which he isn't aware of. For example, we can tell that a person who justifies himself is noteworthy to neither fight or win the challenge
nor lose the challenge cause he does not know what is the real case and how to respond to it.
As a software engineer, it is hard to survive this raging world with consequences. I can provide a solution that one simple way to survive in the company is to
make your manager tension free about finishing your assigned work whether it was wrong or right and can be learned later . The role of Software is pretty
complicated in this rapid pace of life. But though proving your skill-sets might help you jump to the next level of qualification and only in software income or salary of
a person increases in this rapid stage of life where in other professions it is hard to survive and income or salary of a person changes via experience which makes
the person too hard to survive and also in the nearby future.
Therefore, I conclude that the increasingly rapid pace of life causes more problems than it solves in any case, mainly in this generation. Even if you take all the
possibilities that count which will not help you solve any of the problems, because problems and workload increase day by day which in return give you a big
headache which no one wants.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ionate one and resolve an issue or error that comes under their way. For example,...
^^^
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... that comes under their way. For example,I can take as a role of a software engine...
^^
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y career, and also here, I face a lot of competition and issues which is persiste...
^^^
Line 4, column 90, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...ther employees who could not concede it are thrown out of a job, which might tend t...
^^^
Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in turn, provide you a promotion to the next level. At first, we need to think t...
^^^
Line 8, column 79, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
... that company is a place to survive for whats best to improve to jump to the next lev...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...engender each day and we are the persons who must use our skillset to hinder the ...
^^^
Line 10, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...obstacle? One particular example is that , when a truck driver categorize meticulo...
^^
Line 10, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iculous details and loads the goods into the truck and he must make sure that not...
^^^
Line 11, column 63, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...make sure that nothing is missing which shouldnt make him ponder about his goods while d...
^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g on the road and which might drive into accidents where he wasnt conscious about...
^^^
Line 12, column 20, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...h might drive into accidents where he wasnt conscious about it. To prescience, t...
^^^^^
Line 14, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es and solves the upcoming circumstances in a different manner where one plodding...
^^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different manner" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...and solves the upcoming circumstances in a different manner where one ploddingly has to learn his w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 89, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...o learn his way to recognize his talent so as to equal the upcoming ones in nearby futur...
^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g ones in nearby future. Mainly I refuse to tell that person who seeks his true i...
^^^
Line 16, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is one leg to fight the enemies which is recurring spontaneously, which he isnt a...
^^^
Line 17, column 35, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
... is recurring spontaneously, which he isnt aware of. For example, we can tell that...
^^^^
Line 17, column 142, Rule ID: NEITHER_NOR[1]
Message: Use 'nor' with neither.
Suggestion: nor
... himself is noteworthy to neither fight or win the challenge nor lose the challen...
^^
Line 20, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mple way to survive in the company is to make your manager tension free about fin...
^^^
Line 21, column 121, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... wrong or right and can be learned later . The role of Software is pretty compli...
^^
Line 21, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d later . The role of Software is pretty complicated in this rapid pace of life. ...
^^^
Line 23, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erson changes via experience which makes the person too hard to survive and also ...
^^^
Line 26, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his generation. Even if you take all the possibilities that count which will not ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 32.0 11.3162921348 283% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 67.0 33.0505617978 203% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2830.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 612.0 442.535393258 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62418300654 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97379470361 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51811124723 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 296.0 215.323595506 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483660130719 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 891.0 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.0485678752 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.947368421 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2105263158 23.4991977007 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.97078651685 483% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24004154032 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795001695582 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844760980129 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649956148053 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695239419533 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 14.1392134831 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 48.8420337079 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ionate one and resolve an issue or error that comes under their way. For example,...
^^^
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... that comes under their way. For example,I can take as a role of a software engine...
^^
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y career, and also here, I face a lot of competition and issues which is persiste...
^^^
Line 4, column 90, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...ther employees who could not concede it are thrown out of a job, which might tend t...
^^^
Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in turn, provide you a promotion to the next level. At first, we need to think t...
^^^
Line 8, column 79, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
... that company is a place to survive for whats best to improve to jump to the next lev...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...engender each day and we are the persons who must use our skillset to hinder the ...
^^^
Line 10, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...obstacle? One particular example is that , when a truck driver categorize meticulo...
^^
Line 10, column 158, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iculous details and loads the goods into the truck and he must make sure that not...
^^^
Line 11, column 63, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...make sure that nothing is missing which shouldnt make him ponder about his goods while d...
^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g on the road and which might drive into accidents where he wasnt conscious about...
^^^
Line 12, column 20, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...h might drive into accidents where he wasnt conscious about it. To prescience, t...
^^^^^
Line 14, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es and solves the upcoming circumstances in a different manner where one plodding...
^^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different manner" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...and solves the upcoming circumstances in a different manner where one ploddingly has to learn his w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 89, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...o learn his way to recognize his talent so as to equal the upcoming ones in nearby futur...
^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g ones in nearby future. Mainly I refuse to tell that person who seeks his true i...
^^^
Line 16, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is one leg to fight the enemies which is recurring spontaneously, which he isnt a...
^^^
Line 17, column 35, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
... is recurring spontaneously, which he isnt aware of. For example, we can tell that...
^^^^
Line 17, column 142, Rule ID: NEITHER_NOR[1]
Message: Use 'nor' with neither.
Suggestion: nor
... himself is noteworthy to neither fight or win the challenge nor lose the challen...
^^
Line 20, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mple way to survive in the company is to make your manager tension free about fin...
^^^
Line 21, column 121, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... wrong or right and can be learned later . The role of Software is pretty compli...
^^
Line 21, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d later . The role of Software is pretty complicated in this rapid pace of life. ...
^^^
Line 23, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erson changes via experience which makes the person too hard to survive and also ...
^^^
Line 26, column 164, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his generation. Even if you take all the possibilities that count which will not ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 32.0 11.3162921348 283% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 67.0 33.0505617978 203% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2830.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 612.0 442.535393258 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62418300654 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97379470361 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51811124723 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 296.0 215.323595506 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483660130719 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 891.0 704.065955056 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.0485678752 60.3974514979 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.947368421 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2105263158 23.4991977007 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.97078651685 483% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24004154032 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795001695582 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844760980129 0.0758088955206 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649956148053 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695239419533 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 14.1392134831 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 48.8420337079 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.