The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries
Throughout the history of mankind, there are plenty of polymaths, intellectualizes and famous people that their talents and knowledge never discovered in their time. One of the greatest polymaths in the world is the example of this situation is Galilei that he claimed the rounded earth but because of the political and religious condition of that time, people decided to execute him. He never praised for his knowledge in his time, however, the people who lived after him discover his talent. However, I believe there are many famous and gifted persons in the history that they become popular among people in their own time.
Many people believe that the political and social conditions can lead people to accept the peoples who have different kinds of thought and beliefs. For instance, in the past, many countries believed that black people were born to become their slave; People treat them very differently because of their skin color. Many talented persons like Martin lute king defeated to these kinds of unfair beliefs, they became the greatest man in the history. In addition, many people supported his ideas and beliefs; Therefore, many people from his time till now and future are persuading his goals. In addition, for many years, Indian people were under the pressure of England. England decided for Indian political, economic even their culture. Therefore, because of their fragile economic and political condition of India, people became the fan of the Gandhi. He was a rebellion person who rescued people of his country and now Indian people praise him for his beliefs. Therefore, there are many talented people in the history that they become famous among their people because of the political and social condition of their time.
In addition, many polymaths and intellectualized persons in the history took great steps to change their society. For instance, Marie Curie is one of the greatest and most famous women in the world because of the revolutionary discovery of her in the chemistry world. She discovered radioactivity features of the components. She might have the thoughts of changing her society with this kind of sustainable energy. I believe there are plenty of people in the history that they become famous because their discovery changed the people’s life. For instance, Steve Jobs was the first person who had some thoughts about changing the world of technology by adding a high-resolution camera to his unique iPhone. By adding novel features like FaceTime, I message and unique touch screens, a world of technology completely changed people could easily visit each other while the lived in the other countries. Therefore, some people become famous and well-known because they have the power of changing their society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2321.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 447.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19239373602 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58158956798 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429530201342 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 739.8 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6668667462 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.523809524 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107212508385 0.243740707755 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0408522468827 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340024501659 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0812346771132 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163012012546 0.0667264976115 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.