he well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
It is well said that "the person who asks the question is may be fool for a minute but the person who doesn't, is fool for life time. Although some people beilive that asking question to the authority is useless or there is no such need to ask the question as whatever the authority is doing is good for the society and it is for well being of a society, In my opinoin the well being of society will definitley enhance when many people will ask the questions to the authority because untill and unlessthe people will not raise the questions about the problems in the society, the problems will remain silent and may be there will not be any solution at all.
Food, cloths and shelter are the basic needs of the man and now a days beyond this basic needs lot of things such as entertainment, sports, travels and tourism etc. becomes an integral part of life. To run all of these glibly the authority of the country should take efforts, as many are taking. However, failure to do all this
efficiently is also a problem in some countries. Therefore, the people living in the particular country should ask the question why these things are not running
smoothly, because when people do this the authority realises that we are not doing it well and If we fail continuously we loose the power. Due to this the questioning to the authority of particular country will definitely helpful.
Simillarly, In a particular organisation if the problems are persisting from a longer time and authority by themselvs is not recognizing or ignoring as only the
people working in that organisation are suffering and not the organisation, It is always better to point out the problem and ask the question about it so that the authority will come to know that people are suffering and we need to take an quick action about it to run the organisation smoothely.
In addition to this, There are neumorous social issues like environmental protection, wild life protection and protection of some particular people in the society ilke transgender or homosexual people as they are not getting respect in the society. therefor, to get the resepct, the authority should do some rules and regulation as like giving permission to the same sex marriges. it happen only because the people of that particular community asked the question.
In conclusion I can say that, All the scenarios explain above are all support the Idea that the well being of society is enhanced when many of its people asks the question to the authority. Moreover, it is also true that asking a question does not produced any harm and it is good for the society as well as people living in the particular society.
- Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of thesocieties and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibilityof corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as m 50
- The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones. 33
- peoples behavior is largely determine by the forces not of their own making 33
- the best way to teach is to praise positive action and ignore negative ones 50
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability ofhumans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: ASK_THE_QUESTION[1]
Message: Use simply 'asks' instead.
Suggestion: asks
... is well said that 'the person who asks the question is may be fool for a minute but the per...
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Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...be fool for a minute but the person who doesnt, is fool for life time. Although some p...
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Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
... but the person who doesnt, is fool for life time. Although some people beilive that aski...
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Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: ASK_THE_QUESTION[1]
Message: Use simply 'ask' instead.
Suggestion: ask
... is useless or there is no such need to ask the question as whatever the authority is doing is g...
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Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...lter are the basic needs of the man and now a days beyond this basic needs lot of things s...
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Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'needs'' or 'need's'?
Suggestion: needs'; need's
...he man and now a days beyond this basic needs lot of things such as entertainment, sp...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Efficiently
...king. However, failure to do all this efficiently is also a problem in some countries. Th...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: ASK_THE_QUESTION[1]
Message: Use simply 'ask' instead.
Suggestion: ask
...living in the particular country should ask the question why these things are not running smoo...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Smoothly
...tion why these things are not running smoothly, because when people do this the author...
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Line 13, column 119, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... longer time and authority by themselvs is not recognizing or ignoring as only the people workin...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...t recognizing or ignoring as only the people working in that organisation are suffer...
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Line 15, column 126, Rule ID: ASK_THE_QUESTION[1]
Message: Use simply 'ask' instead.
Suggestion: ask
...ays better to point out the problem and ask the question about it so that the authority will com...
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Line 15, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... authority will come to know that people are suffering and we need to take an qui...
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Line 15, column 239, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ople are suffering and we need to take an quick action about it to run the organi...
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Line 19, column 250, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefor
...are not getting respect in the society. therefor, to get the resepct, the authority shou...
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Line 19, column 382, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ng permission to the same sex marriges. it happen only because the people of that ...
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Line 19, column 385, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'happens'?
Suggestion: happens
...permission to the same sex marriges. it happen only because the people of that particu...
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Line 19, column 465, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...articular community asked the question. In conclusion I can say that, All the sc...
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Line 23, column 155, Rule ID: ASK_THE_QUESTION[1]
Message: Use simply 'asks' instead.
Suggestion: asks
...ety is enhanced when many of its people asks the question to the authority. Moreover, it is also ...
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Line 23, column 249, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'produce'
Suggestion: produce
...so true that asking a question does not produced any harm and it is good for the society...
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Line 23, column 350, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eople living in the particular society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2221.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 465.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77634408602 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66665452651 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.41935483871 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 699.3 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.733697506 60.3974514979 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.642857143 118.986275619 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2142857143 23.4991977007 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 5.21951772744 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345684006699 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113996923716 0.0831039109588 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131704656708 0.0758088955206 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1469069482 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146761483788 0.0667264976115 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 14.1392134831 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 48.8420337079 95% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.8971910112 231% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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