High schools should require all of their students to play a musical instrument.
Compose a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the above statement. Develop your position, and offer supporting details. Discuss specific circumstances and give examples in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous. Be sure to explain how your examples shape your position.
In today's world, students should have the knowledge of music. With the advancement in technology, they are spending more time on social media which will lead them nowhere. The basic knowledge of music will be beneficial to them in the long run. Thus, I agree with the assertion that high schools should require all their students to play a musical instrument.
At high school level, the competition among students increases. The pressure of studies and to rank high in class is a lot. Music can provide a source to vent out this pressure. It also helps them to soothe their mind off the burden and tension of daily work. Listening to music or even playing an instrument can prove very beneficial.
Studying the whole time can be sometimes very monotonous. If one knows to play a musical instrument, it acts as a pleasant distraction and calms the person. Playing an instrument can act as a stress relieving factor in today's stressful life. Ability to play an instrument, the students can present good performances on their annual day. When the people around you are well versed in the same subject, in this case knowing music, everyone can discuss about creating new tones or refining those of others and helping each other excel.
Music is also a very good form of entertainment. When students go for a picnic, they often sing songs and play games. It would be a very good plus point if they also knew to play an instrument along with it to give good tune. Thus Overall I am in favour of high schools having the requirement of all their students knowing to play a musical instrument.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
... performances on their annual day. When the people around you are well versed in the same subject, in...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...rument along with it to give good tune. Thus Overall I am in favour of high schools ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.23606557377 0.240241500013 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.154098360656 0.157235817809 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0885245901639 0.0880659088768 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0426229508197 0.0497285424764 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.055737704918 0.0444667217837 125% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.104918032787 0.12292977631 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0426229508197 0.0406280797675 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57784953282 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0360655737705 0.030933414821 117% => OK
Particles: 0.00327868852459 0.0016655270985 197% => OK
Determiners: 0.111475409836 0.0997080785238 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0360655737705 0.0249443105267 145% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0131147540984 0.0148568991511 88% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1594.0 2732.02544248 58% => OK
No of words: 278.0 452.878318584 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73381294964 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.58838876751 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.305755395683 0.366273622748 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.219424460432 0.280924506359 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.147482014388 0.200843997647 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0935251798561 0.132149295362 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57784953282 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 219.290929204 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568345323741 0.48968727796 116% => OK
Word variations: 58.8196697981 55.4138127331 106% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.4444444444 23.380412469 66% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5735930058 59.4972553346 58% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5555555556 141.124799967 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 23.380412469 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.277777777778 0.674092028746 41% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 37.3868904876 51.4728631049 73% => OK
Elegance: 1.51948051948 1.64882698954 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419025825623 0.391690518653 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0793550471428 0.123202303941 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0490848931756 0.077325440228 63% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.473521765006 0.547984918172 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0892143145589 0.149214159877 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144467754686 0.161403998019 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944027275756 0.0892212321368 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.315318353197 0.385218514788 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0199864828955 0.0692045440612 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27573621305 0.275328986314 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486979205061 0.0653680567796 74% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.