Goal's bolster and give the motivation to work meticulously. Here, the statement contends that if the goal is worthy, it should be acme by any means whether by hook or crook. I don't think this statement would be valid for the majority of cases.
Firstly, I would like to start with an example of nuclear energy. The primary motive or to be more precise primary goal to develop nuclear energy was to provide ample amount of energy by using a little amount of input. Well, many scientists worked for years to develop this technology via conducting series of experiments and research. They worked on this project without considering it's side effects or what could happen if this technology was handed to any misanthropist. This goal was worthy enough to attain but at what cost? There are ample some incidents in past which prove that how this goal has served to the environment as well as mankind.
Now, let's consider another case, that is weapons. As we say coin has two sides, every research or goal have it's own two sides. The primary purpose to develop weapons was to protect mankind from dangers. But instead of protecting mankind from danger, these weapons have become our danger or danger to society. Due to once again miss use of these deadly weapons, the caretakers of ours have became our enemies. This agian path us to questioning that whether this goal was worthy enough to attain by any means?
There are some goals which should be achieved by any means. The goals which are helpful to mankind and to society, which have plenty of serene applications with minimal amount of backfire. Like there are many researches going on and many goals have been achieved by humans in field of medicines and increment in human life. Although it was prorly known that these type of goals to achieve will require millions or billions of dollars, but these goals justify that if these goals are achieved will surely help mankind and there will be merely any negative impacts.
Before concluding i would like to share some by Lord Krishna in Bhagwat Geeta, says, "One should only focus on methodology of work, instead of thinking about the outcomes." That one should work meticulously on his goals without thinking about any fruitful outcomes. Any goal has its pros and cons but one should try to emphasize on pros and try to minimize its cons.
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- Of the two leading real estate firms in our town Adams Realty and Fitch Realty Adams Realty is clearly superior Adams has 40 real estate agents in contrast Fitch has 25 many of whom work only part time Moreover Adams revenue last year was twice as high as 69
- If a goal is worthy then any means taken to attain it are justifiable 58
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take In developing and supporting you 50
- The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers artists or scientists but by the general welfare of its people 58
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, well, as to, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 406.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81034482759 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42914216058 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522167487685 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.9775222138 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.19047619048 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232826835485 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699491195072 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079610618119 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125603287012 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252375355326 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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