Generally a country is known by its varied culture, artists, groundbreaking achievements in field of research, and its defense system. But the most important part for a country's rudiment is the development of people residing in the country. A country is known by the quality of life lived by the country's citizens.
Firstly, the greatness of a country cannot be counted without the quality of life lived by the citizens. There are plenty of examples where the countries are developing at the speed of the bullet but the quality of living is deleterious. For instance let us take example of India, India is one of the fastest developing nations in the world. But the rate of poverty is nearly the same as it was in previous years. The number of destitute people is not decreasing, but the number of poor people is rather increasing. India has apex in many areas of research like "Maangalyaan", homemade multiple vaccines for covid virus, and many more but there is negligible improvement in quality of life. There are many places where people are living on side of roads, not having proper two meal course and other derogative qualities.
Secondly, the development of nation is also dependent on the expenditure power and employment of the citizens. Expenditure power and employment are the two most important terms, and which are also dependent on each other. If the employment increases, the source of income in a particular family increases. And as the income increases, an individual's power of expenditure increases. And as the expenditure power increases, the nation's development directly increases. Also, most important the quality of life improves.
Moreover, the indication of great nation is also dependent on the expectancy rate of their citizens. For example, China is a developed nation and it has acme in every possible field of technology. But the life expectancy of Chinese citizen is considered to be vaguely around fifty years which means a Chinese citizen live for 50 years only. Any success in research or any invention in technology cannot compensate for life of an individual.
On the other side, the rudiment in field of art, research in science, space exploration is also a pillar for development of country. Development of any country is dependent on the incentives received by scientists in field of science and technology. Quality of nation is dependent on different artists who have been accolade by many national and global awards like A.R. rahman, poet Rabindranath Tagore, Mother Terresa and other public and godly figures.
As one cannot clap with single hand, a nation cannot develop with the development in quality of life lived by citizens and development in field of art, science and technology. Every coin has two sides, same way the development of nation is dependent on all the factors affecting the nation.
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- Emotional decision 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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...n all the factors affecting the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 33.0505617978 18% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2401.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 469.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11940298507 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98655004658 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434968017058 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 784.8 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3089223851 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.04 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.76 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129344298309 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377245739706 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523317758092 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.070639880409 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393037003054 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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