The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Latest scientific research and ancient rulers are considered by some people to be the parameters on which the greatness of a nation can be judged. It becomes a topic of pride for a country to be ranked in one of the top nations which produces high quality research results. For instance, India was highly praised for it success of Chandrayan-2, a moon rover , which landed on that point within the southern-hemisphere, where no other country’s space craft have ever landed. In the field of art, America has made a tremendous mark, having s huge number of successful pop artists. However, these parameters can be a representative of a country how it looks externally, but internally it is the quality of life that the citizen are living, which is demonstrating how good or bad a nation actually is.
Firstly, the greatness cannot be measured without taking count, the living standards of the people, which includes basic necessity of food and lodging and healthcare. Several countries have reached the apex of research, but still suffer in providing basic amenities to its people. To exemplify, as India taken into consideration earlier in the essay, in the example of high-output research, there are still people living on the streets in the city lights and having to face the daily struggles to get a one-time meal for their family. The quality of healthcare facilities that every citizen of the country is offered with, is also a major contributor to a countries. In the midst of the COVID-19 pandemic, New-Zealand was highly praised, as it turned out to be the first country which was completely free of the novel virus while the other countries where still struggling to contain the virus. This was possible because New-Zealand has a high standard healthcare system and a much better management process.
Moreover, another factor that is a vital part of people welfare is the life expectancy index, which in other words, determine the average years that a person is expected to live in a country. While the history of the rulers, and historic events can define the glory of a country’s heritage and culture, it plays a minimal role in defining the current situation that the country faces. To illustrate this further, considering China which is well known for its high technical throughput and dominating the production of gadgets, have the least life expectancy index of 50 years, which means that a person in China lives for an average age of 50 years. Any research success, or artistical dominance cannot justify the low life-expectancy
Any country which appears to be highly successful in fields of research, or having huge cultural heritage can appear to be great for a far away perspective, but the actual measure of greatness can only be done If the ground reality is checked. The basic necessity of citizens should be the most important criteria of judgment. One should always, first look into the quality of life, including healthcare, that a country offers to its citizens, and then later the success of scientist and the artist before concluding how grate is a nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...c, New-Zealand was highly praised, as it turned out to be the first country which...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, then, well, while, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2582.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 517.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99419729207 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84851300267 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 215.323595506 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522243713733 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 803.7 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.2438598312 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.882352941 118.986275619 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4117647059 23.4991977007 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115178180524 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385382453085 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045461179733 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745531683009 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249203271151 0.0667264976115 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 100.480337079 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.