When we want set a goal, we start preparing to attain it from day one. We work hard and put in all our efforts to achieve our goal. When we do so, the end result of our goal will be very satiating and it gives us immense pleasure. Consider, an example where one wants to learn English. The day one comes up with an idea of learning English, he/she starts looking for opportunities to learn English. One can make a goal sheet of what he/she should do in order to learn English. The goal sheet may contain points like learn 5 words a day, note down the meanings of the words, make a sentence out of the learnt words. At the end of the day one can refer to that goal sheet and see if they have attained their short term goal for that day. Likewise, let's say this practice is carried out for a month and now he/she is able to converse in English pretty decently. This means that he/she has attained their long term goal. The happiness that one gets after putting in strenuous efforts to attain something is the real goal and the result of this goal is long lasting. Whether the goal is worthy or not, it has to achieved through proper channelization of your thoughts and ideas, through preparedness to put in your mind and soul to achieve successful result. This type of means to attaining your goal will provide you with satisfaction and fulfillment.
- If a goal is worthy then any means taken to attain it are justifiable 50
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- The way a message is delivered is often more important than the message itself 50
- Since those issues of Newsbeat magazine that featured political news on their front cover were the poorest selling issues over the past three years the publisher of Newsbeat has recommended that the magazine curtail its emphasis on politics to focus more 53
- Two years ago the town of Ocean View built a new municipal golf course and resort hotel During the past two years tourism in Ocean View has increased new businesses have opened there and Ocean View s tax revenues have risen by 30 percent The best w 60
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, look, may, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 2235.4752809 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 250.0 442.535393258 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.392 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35251694999 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 704.065955056 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.59117977528 82% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7960834966 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4615384615 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199861566338 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845704248164 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670283852334 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199861566338 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 14.1392134831 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 48.8420337079 159% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 12.1639044944 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 100.480337079 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.