Imaginative works such as novels, plays, films, fairy tales, and legends present a more accurate and meaningful picture of human experiment than do factual accounts. Because the creator of the fiction shape and focus reality rather than report on the it literally, their creation have a more lasting significance.
The authoe asserts that the imagination works better shows the human experiment and are more meaningful than the othe rtype of the writing sorts because the creators of the imagination works for example , novels and films and so on are specially careful to the reality of the writing than it’s litrary. In my point of view I tend to agree with the speaker and I think that their imagination balister their writing imagination and I waant to reinforce my opinion from the following aspects.
The chief reason why I generally agree with statement is that when you rean a roman or novel ,…. yoy feel you want trough the streets that the writer talked about that and you feel you live with the people that they live on those times. For example, two years age I read lots of book specially from the shekspear or other celebrities biogrophy. You believe or not, some times when I during my sleep I saw the main character in my dreams sometime like a nightmare and some times like a beautiful imagination world because the sort of the books writing really effect my emotion moreover I most if the time in the days when I read them think about the solution to the problem that the main actor had on their life some time I imagine my self of those times in a way that I gonna to those times a rebates all of the truths and solve all of the problems.
The second reason why I generally agree with the statement is the purpose of the writer from the writing of those kind of the writings was to effect to your imagination in a way you can not forget some words of the novels for several years and all the time when you get in a trouble it comes to your mind and uses other experiment that the book describes on the book. for instance, I read a book about the biology which writes the amphibians and how they tried to develop themselves to living when the world gets warmer for the first time. The writer of the book describe their challenges and their problems in a way that I could feel deep inside my heart how animals like humans have problems on their life. All the time I got in trouble I say to my self do your remember all of the first fishes are in the same condition which of the give up they died and other whose try can adapted themselves to the new condition. Therefore, I forget to give up and decides to try until I got to my goals.
Admittedly, publishing a book is a long process which gives lots of times to the writer to think more about it is assay any edit it over and over which in turn solves most of the literally problem of that, therefore at the end we rarely can see any huge problem in any book which all the times edited on the other series of the copious.
In sum, I think that some sort of the book have better effect in our imagination and our mind than the other, but we never can overlook to their literature which help to bolster its imagination aspect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t is that when you rean a roman or novel ,…. yoy feel you want trough the streets ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yoy
...that when you rean a roman or novel ,…. yoy feel you want trough the streets that t...
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Line 2, column 271, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun book seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of books'.
Suggestion: lots of books
...imes. For example, two years age I read lots of book specially from the shekspear or other c...
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Line 2, column 768, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...ne my self of those times in a way that I gonna to those times a rebates all of t...
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Line 2, column 791, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a rebate' or simply 'rebates'?
Suggestion: a rebate; rebates
...es in a way that I gonna to those times a rebates all of the truths and solve all of the ...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...s a rebates all of the truths and solve all of the problems. The second reason why I gene...
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
...rpose of the writer from the writing of those kind of the writings was to effect to your i...
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Suggestion: For
...nt that the book describes on the book. for instance, I read a book about the biolo...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ouble I say to my self do your remember all of the first fishes are in the same condition ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.3162921348 212% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 76.0 33.0505617978 230% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2345.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 544.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31066176471 5.05705443957 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29195538935 2.79657885939 82% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.419117647059 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 748.8 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 23.0359550562 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.472955024 60.3974514979 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.384615385 118.986275619 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 41.8461538462 23.4991977007 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 5.21951772744 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0882970781755 0.243740707755 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374366556961 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731480604223 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694752952208 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778288615117 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 14.1392134831 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 12.1743820225 139% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.61 12.1639044944 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 11.2143820225 164% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.