For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.
This statement is fundimentally incorect; if you want to be successful in your future life, you would have to get abilities than study hard in the school; some of the people keep the point that being successful in the future life depend to our abilities, but I think that this abilities just can help us in some ways of ours life. therefore, I thotally disagree with the statement. I want to reinforce my opinion from the following aspects.
The chief reason why I generally disagree with the statement is that, they just know the surface of the problems and never can't solve it by themselves. they just know some sort of the problems and their solves. if any problem go a little out of their abilities they can't handel with the problem.
the second reason why I generally disagree with the statement is that, nowadays we needs to expertice, whose can find the problem basically find it's root and then solve it. for example, think about a time when you need to go a doctor. on that times we needs to discusse with our doctor to solve the problem fundimentally. non of us love to go near a doctor whose don't speak with us and just start to write drugs.
In the final analysis, because of the fast development and changes in the scients. you could't be successful in your major unless you get a deep understand in it. I want to give an example from my own major, by the climate change most of the conteries and cities tend to use renowable materials in their bulding. if you don't know and uderstate the concepta ad ideas deeply, you can't combine them to achieve the best design.
In a nutshell, abilitiy can helps you to reach success in a short time of your life. if you really want to be successful you have to learn concepts and ideas then obtian to the abilities. in my point of view knowadge about one concent in its turn is the meaning of the abilities, but ability in one subject don't show your knowledge on that area. by the reasons I mentioned above I totally disagree withe statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...bilities than study hard in the school; some of the people keep the point that being succes...
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Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...pend to our abilities, but I think that this abilities just can help us in some ways...
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Line 1, column 332, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
... can help us in some ways of ours life. therefore, I thotally disagree with the statement...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...w the surface of the problems and never cant solve it by themselves. they just know ...
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Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... and never cant solve it by themselves. they just know some sort of the problems and...
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Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... sort of the problems and their solves. if any problem go a little out of their ab...
^^
Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... sort of the problems and their solves. if any problem go a little out of their ab...
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Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...go a little out of their abilities they cant handel with the problem. the second ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...s they cant handel with the problem. the second reason why I generally disagree ...
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Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...with the statement is that, nowadays we needs to expertice, whose can find the proble...
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Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...ut a time when you need to go a doctor. on that times we needs to discusse with ou...
^^
Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...u need to go a doctor. on that times we needs to discusse with our doctor to solve th...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Non
...tor to solve the problem fundimentally. non of us love to go near a doctor whose do...
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Line 5, column 364, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...on of us love to go near a doctor whose dont speak with us and just start to write d...
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Line 7, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...development and changes in the scients. you couldt be successful in your major unle...
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Line 7, column 313, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...e renowable materials in their bulding. if you dont know and uderstate the concept...
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Line 7, column 320, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...able materials in their bulding. if you dont know and uderstate the concepta ad idea...
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Line 7, column 378, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...state the concepta ad ideas deeply, you cant combine them to achieve the best design...
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Line 9, column 29, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
...design. In a nutshell, abilitiy can helps you to reach success in a short time of...
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Line 9, column 86, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...h success in a short time of your life. if you really want to be successful you ha...
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Line 9, column 189, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...and ideas then obtian to the abilities. in my point of view knowadge about one con...
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Line 9, column 308, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e abilities, but ability in one subject dont show your knowledge on that area. by th...
^^^^
Line 9, column 347, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: By
... dont show your knowledge on that area. by the reasons I mentioned above I totally...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, second, so, then, therefore, for example, i think, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 54.0 22.412803532 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 30.3222958057 195% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1373.03311258 120% => OK
No of words: 364.0 270.72406181 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51098901099 5.08290768461 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47873457749 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 145.348785872 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491758241758 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 419.366225166 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5593802654 49.2860985944 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2222222222 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 21.698381199 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06452816374 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 4.19205298013 549% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107810848756 0.272083759551 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0257939195606 0.0996497079465 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539341036819 0.0662205650399 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0618593302941 0.162205337803 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743146894505 0.0443174109184 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.3589403974 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.2367328918 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.42419426049 87% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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