the importance of friendship
Friendship has been considered of great importance in every people’s life for the following reasons. First, it can help individuals to improve their spirituality. Friends are the persons that they can share any feelings from happiness to sorrow, even the darkest secrets which they can not share with their family members like parents or siblings. Secondly, buddies are people’s comfort zone. Humans can be themselves when they are with besties even though they are wearing pajamas, wearing no makeup, they merely do not care. Buddies love the way they are. Lastly, friends are the persons' hearty cheers. Numerous times in life, people are afraid and the fear stops them from achieving the goals that they deserve to have. But friends will be here to support them overcome their fears and push persons out of their comfort zone. In conclusion, buddies make growth more meaningful, therefore play an indispensable part in the lifetime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 55.5748502994 27% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 16.3942115768 6% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 2260.96107784 35% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 152.0 441.139720559 34% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17763157895 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 4.56307096286 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49236194699 2.78398813304 90% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 204.123752495 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671052631579 0.468620217663 143% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 705.55239521 33% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9854420896 57.8364921388 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7 119.503703932 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 23.324526521 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.70786347227 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 5.15768463074 19% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0664913800651 0.218282227539 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317997661666 0.0743258471296 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953992984998 0.0701772020484 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0664913800651 0.128457276422 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.3799401198 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.3550499002 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.197005988 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 98.500998004 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 12.3882235529 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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