The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
Problems are part and parcel of a human life. A life with no problems at all is a stagnant life which seems to be easy at first but there is not room for improvement for a human being. The human life is evolving so quickly that it creates new problems everyday which is good as it gives us chance for improvement. I agree with the statement mentioned above which states evolving human life creates problems and I'll be putting my case in below paragraphs.
As rightly said that there a solution available to all the problems. But the human life which is growing day by day creates a new problem everyday, sometimes the problems can be solved within a day sometimes it takes longer to solve it due to the complexity of problem in general. Human beings advances day by day by making breakthroughs in technologies which are used for betterment for all, but along with betterment there arises new problems as well. For instance the air purifiers are in much demand in metropolitan cities which improves the air quality within our house and provides us fresh air to breathe in, which is a good invention. These air purifiers has built in filters which filter out the harmful viruses and bacteria from the air and these filters needs to be changed regularly based upon the AQI of your area. This changing of air filters adds to the environmental wastage as these filters are not reusable and non biodegradable. So we've created a solution but it adds up another problem.
The electric cars were invented so that human beings dependency on fossil fuels reduces as it causes harm to all living beings. Moreover the fossil fuels were non renewable source of energy which can't be produced in factories unlike the batteries of electric cars. The battery of a car is made up of lithium which is also a non renewable source of energy, but it is being used to power up the cars as it does not causes any impact to the environment be it noise pollution or air pollution. This usage of lithium in batteries will shift the human consumption from fossil fuels to lithium which is also limitedly present on earth. If more people are dependent regularly on battery powered cars then it'll require more amount of electricity to charge them up which will also be a cause of concern.
The problems should be resolved, but along with the solution of problem we need to find it's long range impact on our surroundings. Merely solving a problem is just not enough if it is solving a case and creating new cases which requires more attention to new problem. To match the problem solving we need to take the solutions provided into account as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...so quickly that it creates new problems everyday which is good as it gives us chance for...
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Line 1, column 412, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...volving human life creates problems and Ill be putting my case in below paragraphs....
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...putting my case in below paragraphs. As rightly said that there a solution avai...
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Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...rowing day by day creates a new problem everyday, sometimes the problems can be solved w...
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Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'day by'.
Suggestion: day by
...oblem in general. Human beings advances day by day by making breakthroughs in technologies wh...
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Line 3, column 664, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
...s a good invention. These air purifiers has built in filters which filter out the h...
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Line 3, column 952, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: we've
... not reusable and non biodegradable. So weve created a solution but it adds up anoth...
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Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...ectric cars were invented so that human beings dependency on fossil fuels reduces as i...
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Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...as it causes harm to all living beings. Moreover the fossil fuels were non renewable sou...
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Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...re non renewable source of energy which cant be produced in factories unlike the bat...
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Line 5, column 414, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cause'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: cause
...sed to power up the cars as it does not causes any impact to the environment be it noi...
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Line 5, column 414, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
...sed to power up the cars as it does not causes any impact to the environment be it noi...
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Line 5, column 630, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ich is also limitedly present on earth. If more people are dependent regularly on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, well, for instance, in fact, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2161.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 465.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64731182796 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56418045187 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468817204301 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0960002654 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.736842105 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4736842105 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172561852785 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669207241904 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628456707858 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122434800113 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538138954139 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.