The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Life has always been a rat race. This notion begins in when a child begins attending school and sticks with you till you are content with life. Unhealthy competition benefits nobody. For instance, in India, when students complete their 12th grade, many of them attempt the IIT-JEE exam. This exam is one of the most arduous examinations in the world. Qualifying this exam guarantees the student admission to one of the most prestigious institutions- IIT. The preparation for this exam begins when the student is in grade 8 itself. This immense neck and neck competition is forced onto a fraction of students who cannot deal with the pressure. This ultimately as led to problems like depression and anxiety. The students are overcome with lassitude.
Advancements in technology have been and are replete with benefits for mankind. They have made life easier and efficient. It also comes with its drawbacks. To quote Newton’s law of motion, “every action has an equal and opposite reaction”. For instance, the invention of motor vehicles has been the greatest boon to man. It has made transport extremely convenient. Opulence has resulted in every person owning a vehicle today. Pollution levels, as a result have exceeded all limits resulting in greenhouse effect and global warming. It has also caused a multitude of respiratory infections, babies born with genetic defects and has had ill-effects on the food chain. These problems overshadow this landmark of an achievement.
When our parents narrate stories to us, they talk about how they had a relaxed outlook to life. They had a set pace on how to go about their activities. The food that they used to eat nourished their body and soul. In order to fasten this process so that we do not waste time cooking, fast food has become the new fad. There are fast food joints at every nook and corner. We no longer eat for enrichment, it has become an obligation. Not to mention, fast food is designed to taste good and be addictive. As a result, obesity, diabetes and other health issues are on the rise.
This fast-paced life despite being thrilling and a rollercoaster of emotions, has resulted in man biting more than he can chew. It has disrupted sleep patterns and the biological clock, caused issues in the menstrual cycle, frustration, stress and agitation. Ignoring health and state of well-being is going to culminate in a reduced life span and is detrimental to mankind. It is of prime importance now to take some time for rejuvenation of the mind and body, connect with the earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2121.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 430.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93255813953 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72960354863 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567441860465 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 6.24550561798 256% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7741334624 60.3974514979 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.28125 118.986275619 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.4375 23.4991977007 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.59375 5.21951772744 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.83258426966 310% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13268412597 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288073279908 0.0831039109588 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359577856523 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749808545615 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032730495389 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 14.1392134831 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 100.480337079 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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