The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
In recent years, as the technology has progressed, pace of life has increased rapidly. Industrialization and Globalization are the two main contributors of this revolution. Some people are of opinion that this rapid increase in pace of life is for good, on the other hand rest feel this has created problems which never existed before. I believe that this rapid increase in pace positively effects humans.
Firstly, rapid paced life has enabled us to lead better and more fulfilling lives. For instance, fruits and vegetables, medicines, cars etc. are flown half way across the world and made available to places where these were not available earlier. Fast paced work culture has tremendously improved management qualities of humans which in long term is a useful skill in both personal and professional life. Thus, fast paced culture has enabled a human more than ever by providing him with opportunities, prosperity and knowledge.
Secondly, fast paced life has enabled us to improve lives of other people too. For example, as a result of increase in pace of overall life, it has never been easier to spread education. People can surf the internet and can literally learn about anything: cooking to building airplanes. Thus, overall this has helped improve lives of the whole race.
However, this rapid increase life's pace has created problems for humans at the most fundamental levels: emotional and psychological. For instance, cases related to mental disorders like anxiety have risen to unprecedented numbers. In some cases, people are embarrassed to talk about their problems and this leads to further deterioration of their mental and emotional health; which in long term has lead to more serious ailments. But, on the other hand, ample evidence is available to support the fact that these instances of break down are more personalized. It is the sole responsibility of a person to take care of his health and seek professional help in case of any problem which is sufficiently provided as a result of this fast paced modern world.
In sum, fast pace of life has helped and enabled humans to do more and achieve feats which were considered impossible before. Although, fast pace of life puts pressure on an individual, but as the famous adage goes: What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger.
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- The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people s efficiency so that they have more leisure time 83
- The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves. 66
- Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 222, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ual, but as the famous adage goes: What doesnt kill you only makes you stronger.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 380.0 442.535393258 86% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09473684211 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77912678847 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542105263158 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6042926966 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 5.21951772744 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313663793895 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993249948506 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085621046161 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179818505027 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502772192021 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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