Issue Task 28.
The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
What kind of a nation regarded as a great nation? As the author mentioned, general welfare can be one of the criteria for greatness. however, general welfare is a vague concept difficult to calculate objectively. when considering this difficulty, it seems that the idea the general welfare can be the most reliable indicator is unreal. For example, Buthan regards themselves as the happiest nation in the world, based on their estimate method. Although they suggest a bunch of standards, it is uncertain how much objectivity it has in deciding the standards and evaluating the phenomenon. furthermore, even if the standards is accepted as objective, still, there is no reason we should consider it as the surest, since a variety of criteria which have a similar degree of reliability exist. it is a common problem all the criteria evaluating levels of the general welfare of nations have since welfare is an ambiguous concept by its nature.
Of course, if considering reliable criteria comprehensively, the degree of uncertainty underlying the concept of levels of welfare can be partially corrected. however, since many other alternative factors exist, it is excessively bold assertion that general welfare represents the greatness of nations in the surest way. In fact, achievements from a variety of fields is considered as an important factor in defining a great nation. For example, the usa is regarded as a great nation not because of its welfare system, but because its people's achievements. For example, many of outstanding outcomes have been generated in scientific fields in the usa. when considering the welfare system solely, comparing to many of western and northern Europe, it is hardly able to say the usa is better. even though so, people do not ascribe less greatness to usa than these European counties, and one of the reasons is because usa's contribution to science is significantly huge. Of course, we can think of many other factors influencing the definition of a great nation as well.
In fact, greatness is a concept difficult to exactly characterized. In the case of applying this abstract concept to nation, the difficulty get worse, as the possible method to estimate the greatness of a nation is innumerous. thinking one criterion as the surest is rather impedimental to understand reality. furthermore, there can be a variety of greatness depending on different perspectives. Therefore, we should consider many of factors comprehensively including general welfare and achievements from diverse fields, rather than believing general welfare is the surest indicator.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in fact, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2199.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 413.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32445520581 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09515464792 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474576271186 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0488343649 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.714285714 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210555531434 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661983062647 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500222760921 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15254327875 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110875109858 0.0667264976115 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.