The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Since time immemorial, humanity, be it the nuclear family, a community, nation or organization has always had a chain of command. A leader or leaders who are suppose to be ideally empowered to be representative of the people and their welfare.
However, several leaders have found themselves in such influential positions championing their personal agenda, often neglecting those who elected them into power. As democracy is popularly defined rule by the people, for the people. For example, the former president of Zimbabwe Robert Mugabe who led the country for several decades always blew his own trumpet, frequently touting how he is trying to liberate his people and country from colonial influence, claiming he had the birds eye view of matters hence his achievements mattered the most. However, the people he ruled over lived in abject poverty, while Mugabe enriched himself and family. This and many other examples have set enough precedence that the achievements of rulers are not the surest measure of a well to do nation.
Therefore I vehemently believe the general welfare of the people is the best indicator of a great nation. Firstly,the people form a greater chunk of the population hence it bodes well for their welfare to be a better measure of the progress of the nation. There are several examples to buttress this standpoint like the many first world countries who despite their own challenges often tries to put their citizenry first. Hence it can be observed that they often have the best of facilities, and the general population
is well to do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y, nation or organization has always had a chain of command. A leader or leaders ...
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Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...a chain of command. A leader or leaders who are suppose to be ideally empowered to be r...
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Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: SUPPOSE_TO[1]
Message: Probably you should use a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...of command. A leader or leaders who are suppose to be ideally empowered to be represent...
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Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...of command. A leader or leaders who are suppose to be ideally empowered to be represent...
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Suggestion:
...ly empowered to be representative of the people and their welfare. However, s...
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Suggestion:
...and family. This and many other examples have set enough precedence that the achi...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...est measure of a well to do nation. Therefore I vehemently believe the general welfar...
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Suggestion: , the
...est indicator of a great nation. Firstly,the people form a greater chunk of the popu...
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Suggestion:
...nk of the population hence it bodes well for their welfare to be a better measure...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ten tries to put their citizenry first. Hence it can be observed that they often have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, so, therefore, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 259.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0888030888 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71314035271 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586872586873 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 704.065955056 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4770293118 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.818181818 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 5.21951772744 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104128223721 0.243740707755 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481369058309 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598684670497 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706099245025 0.150359130593 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259493635857 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.