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The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
The surest indicator of the greatness of a nation is also depicted by the general welfare of its people instead of the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists. I truly believe that one of the major factors towards a nation’s progress is the strong sense of patriotism shared by its people. And people only feel so connected to their motherland when they have been well taken care of by the motherland for their general welfare.
it has been seen in numerous scientific studies that a population of any species functions maximally when it has been provided with all the basic requirements of life. Although these experiments have been done on microorganisms, the results apply to the human population as well. A wonderful example of this is the indus valley civilization which is considered one of the most advanced civilizations to have existed by historians. The reason behind their success is because they had settled in the valley next to the indus River hence they had excellent water availability and fertile lands. they also happened to have excellent healthcare facilities and modern hygiene and sanitation infrastructure. because of this, their civilization greatly prospered such that some of their accomplishments are still unimaginable to modern man.
If a nation is poor and is unable to take care of its people, the majority of the people will spend most of their life trying to meet ends to survive each day. when a person's main goal in life is to just survive somehow, how will they ever reach a stage where they can unlock their talents and do great things. this fact becomes extremely important when it comes to the youth of a nation that is extremely volatile to bad influence. when a nation is struggling in terms of both finance and governance, that struggle is also visible in its people. A bad government with leaders who do not care about their people gives birth to rebellion and terrorism. On top of it, it will also have to deal with other problems such as poverty, unemployment, increasing crime rates, etc. hence proving my point again that the development and progress of a nation are directly proportional to the health and happiness of its people.
Yes, surely the great rulers, artists, and scientists represent the nation and bring great fame and name to it. But if the majority of the population is taken good care of, then the number of accomplished people in different fields will increase exponentially. this point is proven excellently by the greek and Egyptian civilizations that produced a plethora of accomplished people in various fields. The greek scientists were so extraordinary that Aristotle is considered the 'Father of Biology'. Another example of this in the modern world is the United States of america. majority of people all over the globe desire to go and settle there due to the excellent standard of living provided there. due to such a high number of immigrants coming to america, this nation has been able to progress so much so fast.
A nation and its success cannot be separated from the people of that nation. this becomes even more evident when we realize how tightly the success of one person is linked to that of the entire nation. The better the facilities provided by a country to its people are, the more will be the opportunities given to its people to succeed in life. And the more they succeed in life, the more they will be giving back to the nation. evaluating a nation based on the number of great people it has produced is a very superficial way of doing so. The very core of a nation is formed by its people, hence it is only valid that a nation's success is evaluated by the general welfare of its people
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, then, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 92.0 58.6224719101 157% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3072.0 2235.4752809 137% => OK
No of words: 637.0 442.535393258 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82260596546 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.02382911018 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75315983012 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 290.0 215.323595506 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455259026688 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 977.4 704.065955056 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3005712596 60.3974514979 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.931034483 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9655172414 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.79310344828 5.21951772744 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 10.2758426966 214% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230819204889 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670182535973 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777879310688 0.0758088955206 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140005497703 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705332484207 0.0667264976115 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.