It is always an individual who is the impetus for innovation; the details may be worked out by a team, but true innovation results from the enterprise and unique perception of an individual.
First and foremost, in most of the cases an person has a million-dollar idea and has a vision to take it towards the success. In the beginning due lack of funding and human support he has to all work done by most of the team. Leader need to confident at dream and work relentlessly to inspire others. Hence, they could also see a successful future of the company. For instance, When Byju's CEO Srinivasan was asked why is his company so company successful in very short span of time, he said even when he had enough work force to look after his work, he did not feel complacent and work equally as he worked at first day of the company, Srinivasan believed in his idea. So why would i leave for others to work on it.
Secondly, only few companies that sustain in long run. Although, many of them have a brilliant idea. Since, the leader who started the company gets complacent and basks on their success his company have achieved. From that day company's growth flatters. Hence it is crucial for the innovator of the company to be showing same impetus till the end, his employees look up to him for motivation. For example, Roy was a famous fashion designer, most of the famous celebrities where his clients, as he progressed, he thought complacement about his success and started delaying the work. Although, Sam was equally talented as Roy he was more successful than the latter since he had the impetus to move forward and wasnever happy with his achievements.
Lastly, In the long run, the company gets complicated, networks and clients grow enormously. Work load also increases. It is not possible for single person to deal with everything. Hence, he needs a complete team who are equally contributing and share same dream as his leader.
To sum up, individual has a crucial role to play in his company's growth, acts a pivotal point. Moreover, leader show be confident enough to motivate his companions to believe in his dream. However, in the long run it is not possible for single person to do everything and need a team that contributes proportionately in the success, they need to support each other at the hard times.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...irst and foremost, in most of the cases an person has a million-dollar idea and ha...
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Line 1, column 378, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ful future of the company. For instance, When Byjus CEO Srinivasan was asked why ...
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Line 1, column 588, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...rk, he did not feel complacent and work equally as he worked at first day of the company, ...
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Line 1, column 684, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...asan believed in his idea. So why would i leave for others to work on it. Sec...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...few companies that sustain in long run. Although, many of them have a brilliant idea. Si...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...From that day companys growth flatters. Hence it is crucial for the innovator of the ...
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Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
... a famous fashion designer, most of the famous celebrities where his clients, as he progressed, he...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 375.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69866666667 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66232446474 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.357937544 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15 5.21951772744 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126995117444 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414880146563 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312610191228 0.0758088955206 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813200404457 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159715142681 0.0667264976115 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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