It is more harmful to compromise one's own beliefs than to adhere to them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Belief and ideas have been a critical issue in the life of individuals and play vital role in our mental lives. Thus, I agree with the statement which asserts people should adhere to their belifes and compromising is harmful. I will explain my ideas with two reasons and an exception.
Compromising own beliefs could be harmful because it is defect our positons and self-confident. When people hide their beliefs or compromise them, it shows that their ideas are not important for themselves so, how they assume they could be important for others. For example, an employee who hesitate to maintain his idea in the meeting, in fact, destroy his position or when he compromise his belief when the boss does not support him, he would lose his self-confident.
Moreover, defending and insisting on our beliefs, help us to show ourselves as a dependent person and it helps to improve our ideas. When we insist on our beliefs, some may attack them with counter example or counter argument that shows flaws in our ideas. Then, we can think about that attcks and try to improve our beliefs.
On the other hand, some believe insisting in our ideas would not the best in all of the time. Since sometimes our beliefs may be fallacious and insisting on that idea seems ridicules. For example, in the past decades, women could not vote for choosing president or parliaments member. Adhering on this belief could eliminate the ideas of half of the population and foolish. Thus, by changing the minds and beliefs of people the regulation have been improved.
In conclusion, I agree with the assertation most of the time because it augments to position and self-confident of individuals and could show flaws of our ideas to improve them. However, there are some exceptation which is some times that compromising and correcting the ideas would be benefitioal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 378, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'compromises'.
Suggestion: compromises
...n fact, destroy his position or when he compromise his belief when the boss does not suppo...
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Line 4, column 78, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ting in our ideas would not the best in all of the time. Since sometimes our beliefs may b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 312.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91987179487 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72071211419 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519230769231 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8272918673 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9375 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153870260026 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567204363918 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479871206871 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947078523023 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510568443477 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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