Some people believe that it is helpful to view a challenging situation as an opportunity for personal growth. Others believe that reimagining challenging situations this way occupies too much of the focus one needs to face challenges effectively.
The growth and progress of individuals have always been a hot debate in the society. There are several motivation meetings around the world that encourage people to work harder to achieve to their goals. The prompt suggest that some claim welcoming challenges could help people to improve their abilities while other maintain considering any situation as challenge needs more focus to act effectively. In my point of view, I mostly agree with the former group and I will explain my reasons now.
First of all, to obtain progress and improve in our lives, we should leave our comfort zone and try new things. Trying new challenges would not be easy and sometimes we may face ambiguous situation. Dealing with these situations help individuals to improve their brain ability and catch good opportunities. Thus, in general, challenges may face humankind with difficulties, but leads to success and would satisfy the human's spirit. Take Bill Gayes as an example. He was a student in Harvard university, but he decide take a challenge. Thus, he leaved the university and establishes his company in a garage. After long hard working and taking several challenges in his path, he finally has one of the most important companies in the world that have several impact in our daily lifes.
Moreover, taking challenge not only could imorve our abilities and may lead to sucess for ourselves but also could bolster the whole society. People could see others that work hard and take advantages after a while. So, they would follow the same approach and may evoke other people. This cyclic process would help to the society to try to improve their abilities and the whole of the society would take advantages of that. Besides, these people may have contributions that improve others lifes. For instance, Illan Musk, one of the famous business man and scientist in the last decade, contribute several things such as electric car that would help the society to decrease global warming.
On the other hand, some may cliam that people who always are struggling with differen challenges may face some mental problems. They believe they could not manage their private lifes because they are always thinking of new challenges and would not rest enough. They examplify some sportsmen who are struggling with mental probelm after injury or retireing form professional sport.
In conclusion, although holding pressure on our mind to improve our ability may have side effects, Ibelieve these effect would not be serioud and be preventable. Thus, raking challenges in general would benefit individuals and the society.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 511, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'decides'.
Suggestion: decides
...a student in Harvard university, but he decide take a challenge. Thus, he leaved the u...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 749, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun impact seems to be countable; consider using: 'several impacts'.
Suggestion: several impacts
...ortant companies in the world that have several impact in our daily lifes. Moreover, taking...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in general, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2180.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 425.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12941176471 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54531688838 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527058823529 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2207718165 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7826086957 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4782608696 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65217391304 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239446405455 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641274641114 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637488427608 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132491161792 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508355876776 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 511, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'decides'.
Suggestion: decides
...a student in Harvard university, but he decide take a challenge. Thus, he leaved the u...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 749, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun impact seems to be countable; consider using: 'several impacts'.
Suggestion: several impacts
...ortant companies in the world that have several impact in our daily lifes. Moreover, taking...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in general, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2180.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 425.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12941176471 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54531688838 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527058823529 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 672.3 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2207718165 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7826086957 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4782608696 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65217391304 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239446405455 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641274641114 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637488427608 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132491161792 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508355876776 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.