It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are generated and
preserved.
The statement claim that nation's cultural traditions are generally generated and preserved in cities. I agree with this statement insofar as cities are the cultural hub of any nation. Most of the trends and culture are engendered from the city. Also in cities, there are diverse people are available from different nation. And cities are easily accessible for the whole people of the nation. But there are huge cultural traditions are generated and preserved in countryside rather than cities. In village, there are different culture and traditions are available that is flown from decade to decade.
One compelling argument in favor of my position is cities are the main center of the nation. There are different cultural museums, used to preserve the cultures and traditions. Cities are the center of cultural hub. For example, for the bangali nation, Dhaka, Calcutta are the main cities and most of the cultures, movements were engendered from these cities. In Dhaka, there are more cultural museums are available that preserved the past history, cultures and traditions.
Another argument is, in city, there are diverse people are available from different nations. City reconcile the different traditions, cultures and history and make a new traditions. Most of the traditions are engendered form cities then spread to the whole area of the country. As varities people are available in cities, so the government is more concern to preserve the culture of this nation in cities so that different nation can observe the culture and gain knowledge. This is more likely emphasize the nation's value. For instance, in bangladesh, dhaka is the capital and also the largest city. Here diverse people from others country are available for different purpose. So bangali culture can be emphasized by shown them and all over the world can get positive ideas about this nation.
Moreover, cities are easily accessible than countryside that make the preservation hub of culture in cities.
However, village also carry more cultural and tradition value. In cities , everything are artificial and only village carry the native and natural cultural traditions. In village the same culture is flown over the decade. So village is the natural cultural preservation center of the nation.
Many traditions and cultures are also engendered from the village because cities are generated from village and then carry the tradition.
In conclusion, both cities and countryside preserve and generated traditions. They have similar importance for the nations. Although cities and village have contribution to preserve the culture, cities are more valuable now a days because of easy accessibility, diverse people and the major center are available in cities
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'claims'.
Suggestion: claims
The statement claim that nations cultural traditions are ge...
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Message: The proper name in singular (Calcutta) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...for the bangali nation, Dhaka, Calcutta are the main cities and most of the culture...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'tradition'?
Suggestion: tradition
...ns, cultures and history and make a new traditions. Most of the traditions are engendered ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... cultural and tradition value. In cities , everything are artificial and only vill...
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...e the culture, cities are more valuable now a days because of easy accessibility, diverse ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...e culture, cities are more valuable now a days because of easy accessibility, diverse ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 19.5258426966 189% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2307.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34027777778 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67352513869 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.37037037037 0.4932671777 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 774.9 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.475445786 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5517241379 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8965517241 23.4991977007 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.89655172414 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.83258426966 310% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.483969892544 0.243740707755 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16148835474 0.0831039109588 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106890750763 0.0758088955206 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28447092871 0.150359130593 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859257562449 0.0667264976115 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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