It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are generated and preserved.
Cultural activities is one most of the factor which drive's the nation's behaviour or ability to resolve any problem's. Old people from bucolic region's act as an messenger or intermediator between our tradition's followed so far. They also try to preserve the traditions by implementing in their upcoming generation's good and bad action's. Some are illogical while some are believable it totally depends on the person who is being told to. Tradition's set or drive's a country's cultural identity and it varies from geography to geography, person to person and even community to community.
First is the example of Sati Pratha, the ancient tradition of Indian communities. In which woman is burned alive in same fire pit of that her dead husband is burned. This tradition's used to just thwart's the life of woman as soon as her husband dies. No matter how old she is or young, it was her duty to accompany her husband in after life path. After realizing the certainty of pain that women suffer while burning alive, the tradition was dropped by every village of India.
Second is the example of Child Marriage, the tradition of marrying children in young age i.e. below the age of 10. The age in which female's body is not developed for bearing a child, along with household's work. The woman used to die in early age, which led to disproportion of female to males density. After, scientific researches, the government tried changing the just to tackle the density problem and death ratio of female. And, even women's ambition's of getting educated were blocked due to marriage.
Third is the example of Tribe's of South African nation's, where still tribe's follow's their chief's order to implement certain rules and regulation's in their life. Tribe's don't even follow the government order's to get educated or leave tradition's which are harmful in future. Some tribe's even hunt down government official's if they try to force tribe's in following new tradition's
I don't agree with the statement completely, some tradition's which are merely beneficial in future and backed by scientific studies are developed in Cities but not all tradition's are followed or accepted by other citizen's leaving in idyllic area's. Even in some cases, cities were the first to leave of some traditions. I do believe it totally depends on the people and government approach in implementing some tradition's.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
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Message: Did you mean 'implementing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'order' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: implementing
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: Did you mean 'getting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'order' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: getting
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Suggestion: in the future
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Suggestion: don't
...e tribes in following new traditions I dont agree with the statement completely, so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, third, while, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 12.4196629213 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1972.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 396.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9797979798 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66067201931 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558080808081 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.1459155917 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183945450765 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047629343827 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539691091879 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900649732121 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678185779667 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.