It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are generated and preserved.
The issue statement says that the nation's traditions are preserved and generated mainly in cities. However, i disagree to this statement due to the following reasons. Firstly, most of the traditions originated from villages and can be best preserved in villages only. Secondly, cities have negative effect on the traditions and lastly even some cities are preserving traditons too . These reasons alongwith examples are dilineated below.
Firstly, as we all know to study any nation's rich cultural heritage you must study it's villages where the traditions are still very much preserved instead of studying it's major cities where the traditions are hackeneyed. Additionally, traditions have a bucolic origin. In ancient times, when there were no cities, villages were the only source of tradition and as development occured, cities came into existence and as the time passed there came the distinctions between the cities and villages. So, these traditions originated from villages but not from cities. Furthermore, these traditions are degrading day-by-day in cities. For instance, in earlier times parents can scorn their children, they can chide or can do anything but now-a-days they call police even when thay chided them gently, but this parent-children relationship is very much preserved in villages till now. So, traditions are generated in villages only.
Secondly, cities have a negative effect on the traditions, as with the development boon comes alongwith bane. Consider the case of historical forts and buildings which are the source of any nation's rich cultural heritage and many traditions can be preserved there but with the development many forts and buildings have been obliterted just on the name of developement. It is more in case of cities, but you can still find many forts in villages so we can deduce that cities have negative effect on the traditions and values.
Last but not the least, as every coin has two faces, even big cities can preserve and generate values too like cities in countries like Rome, Egypt etc where the traditions are still preserved. Even you can see there are many restaurants which still ersatz thhe idea of old traditions and still serve the food in that old heritage adorned dress. So, it is upto the populace of nation whether they will ruin their rich traditions or preserve them. Even traditions are depleting from villages too. Consider the case of marriages in India, earlier people used to gather for around 10 days even before marriage but now-a-days they came in marriage palace just on the day of marriage and then leave. So, communications are decreasing.
So, at the end i would like to say that the traditions are generated not in cities but they can be preserved best in villages. The reasons for my stand are explained above. But with the efforts of government and the pelebians these can be preserved anywhere even in cities too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, lastly, second, secondly, so, still, then, even so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2428.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 475.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11157894737 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71497506661 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448421052632 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 776.7 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 69.0333554643 60.3974514979 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.166666667 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7916666667 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45833333333 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252024622354 0.243740707755 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832370829909 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685692388903 0.0758088955206 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159704189287 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028404195029 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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