It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are generated and preserved.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Nowadays, there is a different view of the issue about whether the cities is the place which is the origin of the nation's cultural traditions and could preserve it. Depending on personal experiences and beliefs, we may find that some people hold that cities definitely the most important spots in countries which service such functions, while others have an opposite attitude that city is not the only place could support such propose. As far as I concerned, I disagree with the statement of the topic. The following discussion will explore my view.
Indeed, cities are very crucial to any country. Usually, cities are a place with very active economic activity and many differences of business markets are all converging in such places. In general, the prosperity of the city can lead the development of the surrounding villages, and even takes a very essential role to the country. Thus, cities really seem the places to generate and preserve many important elements for countries.
On the other hand, we cannot say it is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are generated and preserved because of cities are vital to countries. It is because, first, cities and rural sides are both contributing to countries. After all, the nation's culture is the whole and should not only include urban's cultures. Second, since cities are the places where cultures and values meet, collide and interact with, its characteristics are more reflected in fashion, open, inclusive, diverse and changing. In contrast, rural sides are more simple than cities. There are a few of change, and the lifestyle and the value of the thinking are relatively conservative and stable, which means they would be easier to maintain the cultural tradition of a country.
In fact, cities only represent the appearance of countries. The living conditions of ordinary people in towns and villages are a true portrayal of a society such as my country, Taiwan. The bustling cities are only part of the face of Taiwan, which cannot represent the entire society in my country. In other words, the combination of city and town is just the nature of us.
In conclusion, despite the fact that cities could be part of the portrayal of countries, there are many other factors we should consider discreetly. Therefore, we cannot presumptuously believe the statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, really, second, so, therefore, thus, while, after all, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, in general, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1966.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 385.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10649350649 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73380787827 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522077922078 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.544747843 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35 5.21951772744 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187848221854 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585441354451 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430971618348 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998258601904 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507106483983 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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