Luck plays more of a role in determining success than work ethic does.

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Luck plays more of a role in determining success than work ethic does.

Ethics are the main factor for determining the success and without ethics success will not have lasted through the life.
But, sometimes luck is important, suppose you are going for a movie and suddenly rain has come. Then you are stopped at the home and these are called luck. Therefore, I think success is more important when it comes from hard working, honesty and of course ethics. Whereas, a successful person with luck will not remain in the same position without ethics.

Success comes from peoples hard working, honesty, candidness etc. For instances, a person became success by winning a lottery but he is frivolous of his success and spends money randomly. If he does not take initiative to proper use of the money one day money will be finished. So, hard working is also essential to retain the position.

Today's world is so competitive and to become successful person ethics is necessary. Morover, hard working makes a person more confident and enthusiastic for solving any problem. Hard working and honesty of a person give the confidence to achieve a goal. For example, we all know about movie Avatar which directed by James Cameroon by ten years of hard working and the movie was so blockbuster that every fan enthralled with the script, background, annimation etc. Whereas in our country everyday release more than two movies but no one knows about it because most of the movies are chief. Thus, success is only determining factor of ethics.

However, luck is also important to become a successful person because luck always depends on the situation, the outcome of the impact. Suppose, a cricket match where toss is important when the weather is bad. An opponent team is done batting before the bad weather and earn bad score whereas another group is batting when raining is so heavy that they cannot chess the run but if the weather is good they can easily chess the score. So, this type of condition luck really matters. Albert Einstein says that "Success comes 90% by hard working and 10% by luck".

To conclude, ethics is significant to retain success than luck. Success is the main key to achieve a personal goal no matter how it is come but ethics are important to remain that position.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 264, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... working, honesty and of course ethics. Whereas, a successful person with luck will not...
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Line 4, column 189, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... his success and spends money randomly. If he does not take initiative to proper u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, of course

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 380.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87631578947 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49203023285 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528947368421 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5006500092 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2272727273 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292752942481 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935687251408 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731703688087 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168361871689 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554718459386 0.0667264976115 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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