Luck plays more of a role on determining success than work ethic does.
The success of an individual is contingent on a number of factors or variables. The extent to which each of these factors lead to success may however differ. The prompt states that a person's luck plays a more significant role in determining success than that person's work ethics. I strongly disagree with the prompt for the following two reasons.
Success is often the measure of completing one's work or duties on time with great efficiency. Thus the work ethics followed by that individual play the utmost important part in determining that individual's success. Work ethics is a factor that is under our own control and we can ensure to succeed in the task we are assigned if we tend to follow proper work ethics. On the other hand, luck may or may not always be on your side and hence it may not always guarantee success. Consider the anniversary appraisal of an employee working in an IT company, where at the end of the year employee's performance is evaluated and his appraisal is decided. During this process, the reviewer evaluates all the tasks performed by the employee, his/her efficiency in doing so, employee's everyday punctuality along with their behavior and attitude in the office's corporate professional environment. In other words, employees work ethics are evaluated to determine how much of an asset has he been to the company in the entire year which is nothing but his success as a good employee. No where is the luck factor weighed against his performance in order to measure his success. This example shows that individual's work ethics will help people acknowledge his/her hard work, efforts and success more rather than relying on luck which may or may not guarantee success.
Further reflecting on the prompt, I find that even though luck is in one's favor,
their ultimate success in what they do solely depends on how well they perform and fit into their role at that job. Many a times we find that the legacy of a business is carried forward by the heir of the businessman or a businesswoman. Their child steps in as the director or head of the business post their retirement. Here we find that the child gets the opportunity to head the company because of luck solely based on the fact that he/she is the offspring of the businessman. But his/her success as the head will more importantly depend on how well can he handle all the duties and the responsibilities. If he acts unprofessionally and fails to follow work ethics or rules and regulations of the company, he/she will fail to be a successful lead for the company. Therefore we see that luck does not supersede work ethics when determining success.
Some people might say that lucky people get more opportunities in all walks of life. While that may be true those opportunities will only result in success if that person is willing to put in efforts to carve a niche for himself in that job role which implies that the work ethics they follow is eventually going to be the measure of their success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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The success of an individual is continge...
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...r duties on time with great efficiency. Thus the work ethics followed by that indivi...
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...ing but his success as a good employee. No where is the luck factor weighed agains...
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...o be a successful lead for the company. Therefore we see that luck does not supersede wor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.3162921348 212% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 60.0 33.0505617978 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2475.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 519.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76878612717 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7058362645 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460500963391 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 762.3 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4081624678 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5909090909 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.40909090909 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38483435635 0.243740707755 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116952069387 0.0831039109588 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118924210214 0.0758088955206 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206460626735 0.150359130593 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964334064975 0.0667264976115 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.