The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
People can enjoy conveniences and still be successful because it depends on their characteristic to use conveniences in good ways or not. There are many positive aspects of having modern life which can bring quick and beneficial results.
Technology such as internet can open a wide World to every body’s life. People can sit down in their sofa and order everything online which can save their time. For instance, a couple who are looking for a high-quality microwave do not need to drive to every store and spend time and energy to find their favorite microwave. Instead, they can stay at home and enjoy watching movies while they can look at different kinds of microwaves online.
In addition, students can use internet to be successful in their academic goals which is one of the most important advances of technology. Imagine a student who has a high-speed internet at home. This student is able to use unlimited internet at any time of a day or night to search for online books, online videos, online flash cards, online practice test, and millions of other useful educational information to become a better student.
On the contrary, some people may believe that internet and video games can distract children from being successful which can be true in some cases. However, parents can monitor their children to use internet in a good way. For instance, a nine years old boy who has been allowed to play video games all day and watch online movies every day is not able to get good grades at school or even make good connection with his classmates. On the other hand, a same boy can be a successful student at school if his parent raises him to play video games only after finishing his home works. In this case, video games are not harmful at all because they can even encourage this boy to become a better student.
People can not live without technology such as internet because it can make everybody’s life easier and faster. Modern life can be distraction sometimes when people use it just for entertainment. But it is everybody’s choice to use an internet in a correct way to become successful person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a correct way" with adverb for "correct"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s everybody’s choice to use an internet in a correct way to become successful person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, still, while, for instance, in addition, such as, in some cases, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 367.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78746594005 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63173227078 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506811989101 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5284653371 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.352941176 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5882352941 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 5.21951772744 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.064271468393 0.243740707755 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288287675727 0.0831039109588 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312421088363 0.0758088955206 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.049809498426 0.150359130593 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302142289707 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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