The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.

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The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.

With the rapid development of technologies, nowadays more and more high-tech products have become the necessities of people's life, from basic needs to personal enjoyment. Cars has been the must-have in a family, roadsters have been proved to be a status and money emblem of moguls. The phenomenon is particularly prevalent in today's China, in which people are proud of having luxuries like luxury car, watch and handbag. Other convenient devices like computers and smart phones also make people's life more efficiently than any time in the history, into which people are immerged. Indeed, luxuries and conveniences seem to be impairing the development of a strong and independent person to some extent. If they are equipped with right value system, people will develop stronger and more independent individuals in the environment of prolific physical life.

Luxury is a influx into daily life of people in China and regarded as an emblem of status and money by Chinese people, particularly by young people. In 2012, the consumption of luxuries in China had made up of a fourth in the total amounts of luxury consumption, one of the largest luxury consumption market in the world. Amongst these people, there are three groups extremely salient. It is the second generation rich and government official second generation who show off all sorts of such luxuries as Rolls-Royce, Ferrari, Chanel, Longines, Cartier, Gucci and go in and out high-end hotels——a kind of extremely sybaritic life, which is impairing their minds and health. Another group is city white-collar, who have a relatively high income, but as they unduly seek for high-level life, their incomes do not always fall out of expenditure:money nearly all spent on daily life like fashion clothing, cosmetics, watches as a way for white-collars to signal their upper mobility and coveting a sort of superficial life(vanity is eroding their minds). Most importantly, some students and low-income youngsters are trying to keep up with the trend of purchasing luxuries so that they are engaged in some immoral work like mistress or sell their organs like kidney, becoming more and more fickleness. Obviously, this kind of consumerism truly harms Chinese people, either psychologically or physically.

With the influx of technological products, modern people enjoy unprecedented conveniences than any time in the history, which seems that without these technological products they could not live any longer. Above all, computers, internet extremely lessen the labor of people and set people free from the chores, having more leisure time to do what they want to do. Today people spend more time on playing online games, listening music, watching network videos and other activities instead of studying or working hard. They know nearly anything happens in the world without going outdoors, although they read extensively reading, in fact they understand less, for this kind of skimming activity lets them pay less attention on one subject——however, deep reading is one means that one develops his critical thinking. They can send texting to anyone they want anytime and anywhere, needlessly face-to-face communications, which will impair their interpersonal ability in the real environment, for they do not need to pay their attention to others' body language any more. And so do other electronic devices such as wearable equipments, vehicles, electric devices. Consequently, if people continue to immoderately depend on this kind of conveniences, their independence will more or less decrease in the future.

After all, the phenomenon is in a small circle of human beings. And, negative effects though technological products have, it will still change people's life greatly, making them more convenient and more independent. As a matter of fact, the key to these effects is the man who use them, not the products themselves. So, it is necessary for people to construct a right set of personal value system, which will guide people to act properly and understand the world they live.

Faced with the temptation of the luxuries, people should have the resistance to them, especially when they don't have enough affordability at all, or purchase them, saying 'enough is enough'. Self-realization, self-restraint, charity should be set up for everyone. In this way, they will be less influenced by the environment and others. The rich second generation and government official second generation will donate their money to philanthropic institutions or help poor men solve fundamental problems in their life rather than abandoning them in a prodigal life. White-collars will exert their more effort on their work, striving for the success of their career. For those students and youngsters who follow the trend of consumerism at all costs, they should identify themselves, endeavoring for a glorious future instead of being a man only seeking for enjoyment.

Furthermore, it is also important for people to develop independence of their own. In economy, they should train their own ability of making money, not depending on their parents or other moguls, and learn to adjust their expense to their income and save money for rainy days. Another factor is that they should culture their independence of personality——independent judgment, capability of will, and healthy body. Moreover, not indulging themselves into network games and the entertainments of other virtual activities, they spend more time on exploring nature, sharpening interpersonal relationship, creativity, all of these enhancing their independent individuality.

In conclusion, with the continuous emergence of high-tech products, people will enjoy a higher-level and more convenient life, which will, in turn, further promote the perfection of individuality, both stronger character and independent personality.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, after all, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, sort of, such as, as a matter of fact, more or less

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 39.0 14.8657303371 262% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 33.0505617978 197% => OK
Preposition: 120.0 58.6224719101 205% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4953.0 2235.4752809 222% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 907.0 442.535393258 205% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46085997795 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.48784481311 4.55969084622 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14765348976 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 444.0 215.323595506 206% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489525909592 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 1528.2 704.065955056 217% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 14.0 4.38483146067 319% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.2370786517 173% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.0744993071 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.514285714 118.986275619 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9142857143 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 10.2758426966 224% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206198099581 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616460949781 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631417434713 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118941496086 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785288956771 0.0667264976115 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 243.0 100.480337079 242% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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