The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
the author states that the luxuries and other high facilities of life prevent people from developing into a strong and independent individual
But the above statement made is not justifiable and in fact its opposite that is true that a strong individual is nurtured by the desire
to achieve such a luxury lifestyle.
The hunger for achieving a aesthetic lifestyle makes people work hard for it. During this pursuit of luxury individuals starts achieving their
full potentials. they become more proactive in pursuit of such lifestyle. The convienence enhance the ability to achieve the max capacity of a
individual by reducing time taken in trivial tasks.
for examples task such as books balancing in accounting used to be tedious task where individual had to manually check for discrepancy in the account which
used to suck all the productive time of an individual which also caused the company a significant waste of resources. the facilities have
increased the efficiency of an individual. individual can now concentrate on other creative works which are helpful for growth of individual.
The inventions of high end transportation have significantly reduced the commute time of an individual. this added time can used in various productive
purposes. also the banking industry is booming because of reduction in transaction times which results in high transaction rates.
In recent light of events the time to communicate with individuals overseas reduced which resulted in globalization thus results in
high GDP of a country and exploring new horizons for a company.
Though does not mean luxury had only positive effects it has few flaws as well. because of luxury and convenience individuals have
become lethargic they often misuse the privileges assign to them. individuals misuse the responsibility. certainly in a few cases when humans become
over dependent on others. Supposedly in the case of performing small tasks such as performing house chores helped people to be active.
Previously running errands helped people to socialize more, meet new people now with online ordering it has become obviate. also the decision
making ability of people is weakening as people rely more and more enervated.
Finally, it can be concluded that luxury although has a few flaw but the positive certainly outweighs the negative in the comprehensive analysis
of the effect of luxury and conveniences on individuals. it has helped humans achieve a quite high level of productivity and satisfaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, thus, well, for example, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2137.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 396.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39646464646 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98776861552 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522727272727 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 70.0631720133 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.761904762 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.97078651685 402% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174726458089 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427761574782 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788631884103 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568158459829 0.150359130593 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105557302007 0.0667264976115 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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