Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many
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The great minds of today's world are striving hard to establish gender equality. In a country like India, women used to be always considered as insignificant to men. But today we find men and women working side by side, acquiring the same positions and competing together. Women of today's world don’t want to be seen anywhere less than men. But is this true in all senses? If they are equal in the true sense of equality, a lot many things have to change.
The recent development in various laws have seen separate laws being made for the women. Various sections of the Indian Constitution protects the right of the women, whereas for the same matters men do not have any special rights and provision. Equality means all laws have to be same for everyone, but this is not the case. Somewhere, women need to realise that there are physical differences between the two genders. We have reservations in buses trains where there are just two classes, one being the general seats where both men and women can accommodate themselves, and other being the women class where no men is allowed to sit. This clearly states that, how much ever women try to be at par with the men, there is always going to be a difference which outcasts every similar quality the two have.
Working in Industries, where workers are forced to do laborious tasks, we don’t find any women among them. Women are considered to be delicate, weaker in physical form than men. This creates a major difference between the two class and hence are not suited for a variety of tasks.
However, when we see Olympics, and the games such as wrestling we may conclude that both men and women are participating equally. What we must realize is that, women are a different set of individuals and men are a different set of individuals. Like how we cannot compare an animal to a mammal, in the same way we cannot compare men to women. Everyone has their own purpose in this world.
There are various tasks which only men can do and there are a lot number of tasks which only a women can do. A man cannot reproduce, but a women can. Each individual is special in their own way and are expected to their duties perfectly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, whereas, as for, such as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1797.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60769230769 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47597396479 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497435897436 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 4.0 0.740449438202 540% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0155181276 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6818181818 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.40909090909 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199897559061 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062426024416 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374551851338 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114488366205 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371027299125 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 12.1639044944 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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