I accept the truth that a man and a woman are the two wheels of the same cart. However, there are several tasks which seek the specific gender. It seems biased in the feminist point of view, but, I will try my best to prove my standpoint with the follows of this essay.
The first reason for my belief is that women are aesthetic by nature. They like to maintain their beauty as far as possible. There are certain tasks that are against their natural inclination, for example, car mechanic. As we all noticed that the physical appearance of a car mechanic while he is doing his job; dirty clothes, haphazardly painted black color of spares oil. Do you think this task is suitable for women? In my view, this is specific for men one.
The second reason for my belief is that women are altruistic in nature, the tasks which need high temperament, bellicose nature, and rude attitude are not suited for them. For instance, at a home, if children are abating to eat salubrious food than a woman or a mother is best suited for making them eat. On the flip side, if children are refusing to do homework and only focusing on a cartoon or other TV series than a man or a father is best suited to make them doing homework. Not only this, it is found that the hostel which is guided by a male discipline in charge are more strict than the one with a female discipline in charge. So, the tasks related to maintaining law and order is best suited for the male.
Moreover, physical appearance and natural responsibility of the women also demarked some restriction on women from some specific tasks. As we all know that every month women are found weak due to intense bleeding by the natural mensuration process. In these days they cannot work as equally as male. In pregnancy time and childbearing time, they cannot work properly in compare to a man. So, much yellow labor job industry only seeks a male worker to get more benefit from the employees.
By making a long story short, a man and a woman are equal in this nature. Howe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tion on women from some specific tasks. As we all know that every month women are ...
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Line 7, column 284, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...cess. In these days they cannot work as equally as male. In pregnancy time and childbearin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 369.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50135501355 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40798069885 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531165311653 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5288754965 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.05 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.45 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211586039548 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061322515755 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520610166343 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09652334025 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666368451732 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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