Men and Women because of their physical difference, are not suited to every tasks.
The point of the issue is to analyze the striking mismatch between the physical mismatch of the body structure of man and woman and if that's a factor in deciding the capability of both gender.
From ancient ages, Men were believed to be more physically strong and the job of the female was only considered only household and reproductive work. While this mindset has been scraped in recent centuries, still the relative working potential of both genders in different fields is still a matter of debate.
Biologically, men are more physically active and a higher portion of the male than females are capable of doing the physically strenuous work that may not be feasible by the rest. For example, mining, mechanical, manufacturing, manual agriculture fields require high physical endurance for which the employers hire more male engineers and laborers. It's quite predictive and visible that, the productivity of females is drastically lower than males in these tasks.
While I concede with the author in the above paragraph, there are other areas in which women have proved to be equally productive as men. Be it science, literature, medical technology, entertainment industries, humanities, computer engineering, and business, women have added a lot of dynamism and made these fields vigorously gender-balanced. An appropriate gender balance is highly required in most of the tasks to make the work-environment lucid. The government and women empowerment organizations, working towards bridging the social stigma and making this possible, are to be most appreciated.
It's true that some physically and mentally challenging fields don't suit women owing to their hormonal and biological structure of the body. The high fluctuations of hormones inside the female body impact their mental health to be adaptive to these heavy-work environments. Similarly, the physical structure of men's body is not suitable to give birth and feed milk to the babies, so the societal mindset for men's tasks is more economical than social responsibilities.
To conclude, I would like to emphasize the requirement of gender-balance in our work environments and society. I appreciate the closure of the gap between the men and women's capabilities in recent days, and how women have come out to be tantamount efficient in challenging fields such as engineering, politics, and entertainment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... body structure of man and woman and if thats a factor in deciding the capability of ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...sically and mentally challenging fields dont suit women owing to their hormonal and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, similarly, so, still, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43010752688 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16761582796 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572580645161 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0624263506 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 134.666666667 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201094103096 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654982342361 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545529345703 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097001801192 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530201841632 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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