A nation require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
Some people think that a nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college, as this improves the standards of schooling.This not only improves standards, but also reduces stress in the field of education.While, some say that change in curriculum is needed as interest of students vary and the same curriculum may not be suitable for all the children.The issue is a controversial one but closer examination reveals that same national curriculum is the best choice.
One reason is that it reduces stress on student. There are curriculum which are really high in standards for an individual. Schools often charge more tuition fee showing the curriculum that is different from others. Such schools to show off their curriculum start imposing pressure on students. Whereas following the same national curriculum will not have these issues. The curriculum will be in the standards of student and as all the schools follow the same curriculum , probably the fairs collected as tuition fee may also reduce.
With this low fairs students with low financial background will also be able get education with the same standards. The literacy rate may grow.The ranking system also works more effectively as all the students are with same curriculum.While,there are some controversial points that same curriculum may not be suitable to all the students. There are students who are interested in sports and not in education for them the regular curriculum may not be suitable.Curriculum with extra concentration on sports best suits them. But these cases may be less in number comparatively.
In summary, while there are arguments from both the sides of the issue, it is clear that same national curriculum have several advantages comparatively.
It improves the standards of education and also draws more number of students towards education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, whereas, while, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 299.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33110367893 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12876262371 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47491638796 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 118.775508005 60.3974514979 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.615384615 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386573125986 0.243740707755 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123055769154 0.0831039109588 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126081959616 0.0758088955206 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210915500344 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15377772792 0.0667264976115 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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