A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
College plays a major role in shaping up a student's career. Prior to this phase in a student's life, he/she learns to develop skills to land in their choice of college, and these skills are taught in their school. The prompt recommends that, all the students in a nation should be made to study the same national curriculum in school. I strongly agree with this opinion for two compelling reasons.
Although college helps a student in defining their career path, school life is the foundation of this career and will have an immense influence on his/her whole future ahead. Children in school should study the same national curriculum, because if they are allowed to choose their path of study in this small age itself, they might end up taking a wrong decision. This is because school students doesn't have enough knowledge and maturity in deciding their future career path since they haven't seen the outside world yet. In some cases, this might not hold true if they have a proper guidance. However, in some under developed countries, most parents are illiterate and do not know how to guide their children even if they want to. This is why students cannot choose the right path for them in their school life.
In countries like India, each state has their own national curricul for school students and some schools follow a well developed national curriculum. Therefore, in school, all the students learn a wide range of subjects and at the end of their tenth grade they are asked to choose their choice of subject. Further, when they finish their twelth grade, they get to choose their career path and their choice of study in a college in which they succeed to get an admission. The above method helps student to have atleast a basic knowledge in all the aspects which is very much needed in the future in everyday life. For instance, if this method is not followed and students end up choosing science or math in their school life itself, a science student will not be taught mathematics in his/her school life and we all know how important it is for one to know atleast the basic mathematic calculations even if he/she is a science graduate. Thus, one should be taught all the subjects from childhood itself.
But not everyone agree with this and they assert that it is right and necessary for students to choose their choice of study at the beginning of their student life, to which I don't agree at all for the reasons mentioned above. So, it is very important for a person to have a basic knowledge in every subject to be able to survive in the future.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
College plays a major role in shaping up...
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Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...udents career. Prior to this phase in a students life, he/she learns to develop skills t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is opinion for two compelling reasons. Although college helps a student in defi...
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Line 2, column 402, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...cision. This is because school students doesnt have enough knowledge and maturity in d...
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Line 2, column 492, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ing their future career path since they havent seen the outside world yet. In some cas...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ht path for them in their school life. In countries like India, each state has ...
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Line 3, column 524, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'basic knowledge'.
Suggestion: basic knowledge
...ve method helps student to have atleast a basic knowledge in all the aspects which is very much n...
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Line 3, column 1009, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...all the subjects from childhood itself. But not everyone agree with this and the...
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Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...nning of their student life, to which I dont agree at all for the reasons mentioned ...
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Line 4, column 280, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'basic knowledge'.
Suggestion: basic knowledge
... is very important for a person to have a basic knowledge in every subject to be able to survive ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to be able to survive in the future.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 33.0505617978 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2121.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 452.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69247787611 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32428852238 2.79657885939 83% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442477876106 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 641.7 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5360547006 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247477581389 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997548818372 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108886311529 0.0758088955206 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184128728844 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629443517572 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 48.8420337079 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
College plays a major role in shaping up...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...udents career. Prior to this phase in a students life, he/she learns to develop skills t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is opinion for two compelling reasons. Although college helps a student in defi...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 402, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...cision. This is because school students doesnt have enough knowledge and maturity in d...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 492, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ing their future career path since they havent seen the outside world yet. In some cas...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ht path for them in their school life. In countries like India, each state has ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 524, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'basic knowledge'.
Suggestion: basic knowledge
...ve method helps student to have atleast a basic knowledge in all the aspects which is very much n...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1009, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...all the subjects from childhood itself. But not everyone agree with this and the...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...nning of their student life, to which I dont agree at all for the reasons mentioned ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 280, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'basic knowledge'.
Suggestion: basic knowledge
... is very important for a person to have a basic knowledge in every subject to be able to survive ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to be able to survive in the future.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 33.0505617978 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2121.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 452.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69247787611 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32428852238 2.79657885939 83% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442477876106 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 641.7 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5360547006 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.833333333 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247477581389 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997548818372 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108886311529 0.0758088955206 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184128728844 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629443517572 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 48.8420337079 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.