A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Education is the building block of any society in current era.
I agree with the recommendation that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum.
The first reason is that in primary schools, students are not matured enough to decide what subjects they should take,so if we provide them a standard set of syllabus and courses it will open a wide range of opportunities to them in future when they enter college.
On top of that, same national curriculum will encourage equality among the people of a nation. For example in my country , we have the option of multiple system, i.e CBSE, ICSE and state boards. And all of them have a different level of score system.
In State Boards, students are able to score less than CBSE and in CBSE, students are able to score less than ICSE. So at time of placement, where there is a selection criteria for example 80% above, then very few state borad students are able to cross that selection criteria because in state boards it is very tough to get even 80%. So even the good candidates are getting debarred from sitting in the college placements.
If same curriculum is followed all over nation , it will encourage the students to be less tensed during the multiple entrance exams for getting into a college. As all the students have read the same curriculum and the entrance exams will be same for all students.
Hence providing a uniform education system to the society is beneficial for the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e of a nation. For example in my country , we have the option of multiple system, ...
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Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun state seems to be countable; consider using: 'few states'.
Suggestion: few states
...iteria for example 80% above, then very few state borad students are able to cross that s...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e curriculum is followed all over nation , it will encourage the students to be le...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...exams will be same for all students. Hence providing a uniform education system to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, then, for example, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 259.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76833976834 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51658522913 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53667953668 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8414572015 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.916666667 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365871202217 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134745237988 0.0831039109588 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175995444629 0.0758088955206 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176874451089 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.206060332897 0.0667264976115 309% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 100.480337079 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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