This is quite a good feat on the part of the nation to provide a national curriculum for all students in the nation irrespective of class system. The prompt states that the nation states that all of its students study the same national curriculum until they enter college. In my opinion, I mostly agree with this statement for three reasons.
Firstly, providing the same national curriculum ensures a uniform standard of education across all the states in the nation disregarding whether or not all the students are of elitist or plebian families. A good example is the promotion of the 12 compulsory education system with the same national curriculum for all its students. This act by the nation ensures the standard is education is high and all students are equal and given the best education regardless of class systems and ensures they are able to adapt to certain real life situations regardless of what they study in college.
Secondly, requiring the same curriculum to be taught in all schools across the nation maybe an act of culture and history preservation. For instance, China is a nation rich in history, culture and heritage and the nation may develop a curriculum that conforms with its nations educational system that dates back into history as a way to preserve history and also pass down knowledge. Thus, a conforming curriculum across a nation is a good tact of the nations leaders to ensure patriotism and history preservation.
Thirdly, Propagating that all states in a nation use the same national curriculum may not hold water if the condition of a particular state is not taken into consideration, this could be in terms of the terrain, income status of the people, how many are willing to go to school? However if studies are carried out and the nation takes these questioned into consideration and finds a way to solve all these, then the prompt would hold water.
In conclusion, the requirement of the same national curriculum for all students in the country before they enter college holds water.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...l the states in the nation disregarding whether or not all the students are of elitist or pleb...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...system with the same national curriculum for all its students. This act by the na...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...e history and also pass down knowlegde. Thus a conforming curriculum across a nation...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
..., how many are willing to go to school? However if studies are carried out and the nati...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hese, then the prompt would hold water. In conclusion, the requirement of the sa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 325.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97230769231 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74863451844 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464615384615 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8183870207 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.666666667 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0833333333 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9166666667 5.21951772744 228% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461656582361 0.243740707755 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222233610157 0.0831039109588 267% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113794413662 0.0758088955206 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.310514739927 0.150359130593 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736166733508 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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