A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Educational curriculum plays an important role in shaping the students for their future.Students learn and develop their personalities in school which majorly depends on the type of their education.So it is important that everybody receives the same basic education.
Same national curriculum is going to help every student to compete with each other fairly. Before entering in college there are numerous entrance tests that students are supposed to clear in order to study further. At that point it becomes difficult for a lot of students to score good marks and secure a good college just because their basic educational curriculums are different.Private schools students have a different curriculum compared to government school students. So this builds the gap between students.Students while competing should be at the same level of knowledge then only the competition can be considered fair.
Apart from education , schools extra co-curricular activities also play an important role in shaping the student's personalitiy.Activities like Eloqution competition,Debate competition,Essay competition,Poster making competition,etc help the student to gain confidence and develop their skills.But majority of the schools don't have these activities as a part of the curriculum because of which the students of that school lack in these skills,which affects them later on in life.While the schools which conduct these activities produce immensely talented and confident students who perform amazing in every aspects of life.A curriculum should develop all the students socially and politically.
Every student is not same and every student is not good in academics so a balance of academics and co-curricular is necessary to be provided to each and every student, so that they all get the chance to grow in their desired field. Learning capabilities of students might be different but they all should be provided with same opportunities for their future.Hence,the governement should try their best to provide same national curriculum to all the students across the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n shaping the students for their future.Students learn and develop their personalities i...
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... depends on the type of their education.So it is important that everybody receives...
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Suggestion:
...every student to compete with each other fairly. Before entering in college there...
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Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ent to compete with each other fairly. Before entering in college there are numerous ...
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...c educational curriculums are different.Private schools students have a different curri...
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...So this builds the gap between students.Students while competing should be at the same l...
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...onsidered fair. Apart from education , schools extra co-curricular activities ...
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Suggestion: Activities
...le in shaping the students personalitiy.Activities like Eloqution competition,Debate compe...
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...Eloqution competition,Debate competition,Essay competition,Poster making competition,e...
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...ion,Debate competition,Essay competition,Poster making competition,etc help the student...
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...ay competition,Poster making competition,etc help the student to gain confidence and...
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Suggestion: But
...ain confidence and develop their skills.But majority of the schools dont have these...
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Suggestion: don't
...heir skills.But majority of the schools dont have these activities as a part of the ...
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...ents of that school lack in these skills,which affects them later on in life.While the...
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...lls,which affects them later on in life.While the schools which conduct these activit...
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Suggestion: A
...erform amazing in every aspects of life.A curriculum should develop all the stude...
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... desired field. Learning capabilities of students might be different but they all...
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Suggestion: Hence
...ith same opportunities for their future.Hence,the governement should try their best t...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ame opportunities for their future.Hence,the governement should try their best to pr...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 312.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66025641026 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46450527537 2.79657885939 124% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522435897436 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 175.370990688 60.3974514979 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 220.75 118.986275619 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0 23.4991977007 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306330615633 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15210040105 0.0831039109588 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909131574884 0.0758088955206 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184238074907 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102521537427 0.0667264976115 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.7 14.1392134831 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.97 48.8420337079 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.9 12.1743820225 172% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.14 12.1639044944 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Students
...n shaping the students for their future.Students learn and develop their personalities i...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
... depends on the type of their education.So it is important that everybody receives...
^^
Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...every student to compete with each other fairly. Before entering in college there...
^^
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ent to compete with each other fairly. Before entering in college there are numerous ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Private
...c educational curriculums are different.Private schools students have a different curri...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 516, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Students
...So this builds the gap between students.Students while competing should be at the same l...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 21, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...onsidered fair. Apart from education , schools extra co-curricular activities ...
^^
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Activities
...le in shaping the students personalitiy.Activities like Eloqution competition,Debate compe...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Debate
...iy.Activities like Eloqution competition,Debate competition,Essay competition,Poster ma...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Essay
...Eloqution competition,Debate competition,Essay competition,Poster making competition,e...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Poster
...ion,Debate competition,Essay competition,Poster making competition,etc help the student...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...ay competition,Poster making competition,etc help the student to gain confidence and...
^^^^
Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...ain confidence and develop their skills.But majority of the schools dont have these...
^^^
Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...heir skills.But majority of the schools dont have these activities as a part of the ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 442, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...ents of that school lack in these skills,which affects them later on in life.While the...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 479, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...lls,which affects them later on in life.While the schools which conduct these activit...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 623, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...erform amazing in every aspects of life.A curriculum should develop all the stude...
^
Line 7, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... desired field. Learning capabilities of students might be different but they all...
^^
Line 7, column 360, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...ith same opportunities for their future.Hence,the governement should try their best t...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 365, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ame opportunities for their future.Hence,the governement should try their best to pr...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1766.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 312.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66025641026 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46450527537 2.79657885939 124% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522435897436 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 175.370990688 60.3974514979 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 220.75 118.986275619 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0 23.4991977007 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306330615633 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15210040105 0.0831039109588 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909131574884 0.0758088955206 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184238074907 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102521537427 0.0667264976115 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.7 14.1392134831 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.97 48.8420337079 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.9 12.1743820225 172% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.14 12.1639044944 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.