A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
A curriculum is a course of study which is set by an educational institution for the students to follow and complete their education. In the prompt, it is stated that a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter their college. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with this prompt for the following three reasons.
Firstly, when there is a curriculum that is set for an entire nation there is no choice for the young generation to pursue their own interests. For instance, when the curriculum set by the nation focuses on an area which an individual might not be interested in, then the student does not have a choice of pursuing his interests untill he enters a college which might lead him to underperforming as a result. If the above instance stand true then the statement given in the prompt might not hold water.
Secondly, If the curriculum for an entire nation is set to be the same, then there might not be many young flexible and brilliant minds that could come out of this curriculum. For instance, when the entire nation follows the same curriculum there is not a necessity for the young to think out of the box as the curriculum has already been set in a particular pattern. So, if they could just follow the curriculum then the students could get higher scores despite their lack of flexible thinking as they might not face any problems in the curriculum, which could lead then to not developing their problem solving abilities. If either of the above case stands true then the statement in the prompt is not persuasive.
Lastly, when there is a national curriculum the there are a lot of younger generation who are now second guessing their choice of course to enter a college. For instance, a student who has followed a single pattern set by the nation and its curriculum without any choice of his interest, without any changes in the course, now has to select a course of study to enter the college some of the students who complete this national curriculum might get bombarded with a number of choices and be unable to select a course for entering the college and again lean towards the most popular course as it is a trend. If the above case stands true then a suggestion to set a national curriculum might not ne right course of action for a nation and its students.
Of course, some may argue that the students by following a national curriculum could bring the standards of the education higher and become uniform. However, a curriculum has to be set for the students according to their interested course of study, if an entire nation follows a single curriculum then the students are the ones to suffer as they could not pursue their interests from an early age and now are unable to decide which path to take when they need to enter the college, there could be some compulsory subjects in the curriculum, but it is necessary for the curriculum to be open as the students could pursue their interest along with those compulsory subjects. Thus the statement given by the promptmight not be an appropriiate one.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ead him to underperforming as a result. If the above instance stand true then the ...
^^
Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me out of this curriculum. For instance, when the entire nation follows the same ...
^^
Line 5, column 625, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...loping their problem solving abilities. If either of the above case stands true th...
^^
Line 7, column 381, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... a course of study to enter the college some of the students who complete this national cur...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 674, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...t along with those compulsory subjects. Thus the statement given by the promptmight ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, as to, for instance, of course, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2552.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 544.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69117647059 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60999376897 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.365808823529 0.4932671777 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 807.3 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.708815748 60.3974514979 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.5 118.986275619 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 23.4991977007 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 5.21951772744 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271745304287 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114358008157 0.0831039109588 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922494730554 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195672371015 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629228979688 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 14.1392134831 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 48.8420337079 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ead him to underperforming as a result. If the above instance stand true then the ...
^^
Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me out of this curriculum. For instance, when the entire nation follows the same ...
^^
Line 5, column 625, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...loping their problem solving abilities. If either of the above case stands true th...
^^
Line 7, column 381, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... a course of study to enter the college some of the students who complete this national cur...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 674, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...t along with those compulsory subjects. Thus the statement given by the promptmight ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, as to, for instance, of course, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2552.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 544.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69117647059 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82947280553 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60999376897 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.365808823529 0.4932671777 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 807.3 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.10617977528 322% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.708815748 60.3974514979 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.5 118.986275619 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.0 23.4991977007 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 5.21951772744 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271745304287 0.243740707755 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114358008157 0.0831039109588 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922494730554 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195672371015 0.150359130593 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629228979688 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 14.1392134831 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 48.8420337079 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.