A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The study curriculum that a student should go through decides the future of his/her, so choosing a curriculum should be done according to the intrests of the individual. so iI strongly disagree with the recommendation of a nations students to follow the same curriculum until they enter college. there are 2 reasons why a there should be different curriculums or approaches in the nation for better conditions of students to shine in their own way.
Firstly lets assume a nation where students go through the same curriculum until they enter college and the other nation in which studends can go through different curriculum. so if we look into the nation in which students going through same curriculum , we can observe the skillset of the students concentrated towards the same point. This could effect the nations growth in different domains, whereas if we look into the other nation the students go through different curriculum according tho their interests and capabillities and the scope of nations growth will be more and also the future of children is decided by their own choices. so in my opinion it will be better to show multiple paths than to narrow down the oppourtunities.
lets take india as an exmaple, india is rich in youth, if whole nation students should go through same curriculum then the competition will become more, the oppourtunities will be less, there will more than average number of students who will fail to do good in their career path. for the benefits of all the nation and the students, by keeping the advancements that are taking place currently, it is not a good recommendation to follow same curriculum. The youth of india have many direction in their own learning phase and we can see the growth of the nation and succes rate of the students is high. so in my strongly state that the recommendation that is given not acceptable.
there will be some confusion of choosing right curriculum but with proper guidance and knowledge a student can easily take good decision and can achieve miracles. Even if the decision not gone as expected there will be more options for an individual to move forward. it is good idea to follow same curriculum if we assume all the students of the nation as merits but practically it is not possible.
so by keeping all the students in mind and their freedom of choosing their own career paths and for the better growt of nation as well as students it is good to have different curriculum so as to protect students from getting demotivated by have single path.
so according the above examples and assumptions it is not advantageous to students of nation to follow a same curriculum util they ent
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, so, then, well, whereas, as to, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2227.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 458.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86244541485 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76798907499 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.399563318777 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 685.8 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.878408997 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.1875 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.625 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414311822253 0.243740707755 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168338596514 0.0831039109588 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11368293105 0.0758088955206 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25120167785 0.150359130593 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863245114029 0.0667264976115 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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