A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The school years are the mosy important phases throughout the ones life that prepares them for the real life. Having an opportunity to get a high quality education is very special until individuals decide what they want to achieve in the their life. While some may argue that there should be a diversity in schools regarding the study program, I mostly agree with the recommendation that a nation should require all of its students to study with the same national curriculum until they apply for university for two reasons.
One of the primary reason is that every student will be provided with the same level of education despite the financial status of their families. This situation will enable students to have an equality which is crucial for building a competitive and knowledgeable workforce. For instance, countries like Finland have successfully implemented a national curriculum, leading to consistently high educational outcomes. This approach guarantees that every student, regardless of their location or financial background, has access to the same educational resources and opportunities.
Mooreover, a national curriculum can foster a sense of a national unity by promoting a shared educational experience among students from diverse backgrounds. When students learn about their country's history, culture, and values through standardized curriculum, they develop a common bond and understanding of their nation's identity. For instance, in the United States, a national curriculum could ensure that all students learn about the nation's founding principles and history, helping to build a bridge and create a unitified population.
In conclusion, the idea of a requiring all students study the same national curriculum until they enter college carries significant benefits, such as ensuring a high standard education and fostering national unity. However, it is vital to strike a bbalance by allowing some flexibility to accomodate regional differences and promote innovation ineducation.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...als decide what they want to achieve in the their life. While some may argue that there s...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: COMMON_BOND[1]
Message: Use simply 'bond'.
Suggestion: bond
...standardized curriculum, they develop a common bond and understanding of their nations iden...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 517, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y, helping to build a bridge and create a unitified population. In conclusion,...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, regarding, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 303.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6402640264 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06081368633 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594059405941 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4709353732 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.416666667 118.986275619 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313447546249 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109267637045 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100385923211 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192644515903 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451973468069 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 14.1392134831 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 48.8420337079 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.1639044944 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.38706741573 122% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...als decide what they want to achieve in the their life. While some may argue that there s...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: COMMON_BOND[1]
Message: Use simply 'bond'.
Suggestion: bond
...standardized curriculum, they develop a common bond and understanding of their nations iden...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 517, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y, helping to build a bridge and create a unitified population. In conclusion,...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, regarding, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 303.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6402640264 5.05705443957 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06081368633 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594059405941 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4709353732 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.416666667 118.986275619 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313447546249 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109267637045 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100385923211 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192644515903 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451973468069 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 14.1392134831 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 48.8420337079 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.1639044944 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.38706741573 122% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 100.480337079 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.