A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Can a nation have a same national curriculum for students untill they enter college, it largely depends on the diversity and size of that nation. So in case of small and less diverse countries this system could be implemented, but with diverse nations it could not be possible. Stating this, i do not fully agree with the given statement.
Most countries in the world are diverse and they have different history, language, culture related to different parts of their country. If a same national curriculum will be taught in the schools then that will be unfair to different languages and history of different parts of the country, as their language or history will not be a part of the national curriculum. We can take example of India here. India is a diverse country and it is almost impossible to have same curriculum for different states of the country. As every state has their own history and language. In northern part of the country people use mostly Hindi but in the southern part, people do not understand Hindi. So if Hindi will be added as a language to the national curriculum then that will be unfair to the local languages of the people living in south.
Other than the difficulties which will be faced in implementing a national curriculum, there are other down sides to it. A same national curriculum will force oneness over the diversity of a nation thus suppressing culture and ideas of a section of country's population.
Subjects related to history and language can not be same for the whole nation but subjects like science and maths could be made similar for the whole nation. As these subjects do not vary with the location and are dependent on natural laws which are same for every part of the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 293, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...it could not be possible. Stating this, i do not fully agree with the given state...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will force oneness over the diversity of a nation thus suppressing culture and id...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 301.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76079734219 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56772592198 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455149501661 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6901671293 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.357142857 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.64285714286 5.21951772744 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215162484779 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866580322695 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835137423399 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165496006365 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577669686661 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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