a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter collage.
Education is one of the most important requirement of the society in twenty first century to live a better life education is most. In every nation a national curriculum is established by the educationalist and professionals for the students of the country to maintain the coherence in the education system. Therefore, I agree with the statement stating that before students enter college, the nation should must all of them to study the same national curriculum.
Firstly, the students are unaware of the different fields of study in the world until their college. So a basic course in each field is to be provided. For instance, a child in school cannot determine if he can do better in science or politics or law. During this teenage period he may get fascinated by any movie or drama or by novel which he might have recently studied. Based on it, he may decide his course as per the character of the movie or novel. This might lead him to poor future of the child. So a study of the same national curriculum is necessary for the child so that when he is fully mature and mentally prepared to decide his path he can decide the best path for his future.
Secondly, there are many personalities in the world who even without getting formal education have done great contributions to the world. For instance, Pablo Picasso is one of the renowned painter. He abandoned his schooling even when he was admitted to an arts school in Barcelona stating that the education was not fit for him. He was highly interested in painting and did not wanted to do the formal schooling. In the same way, another genius in Mathematics, Ramanujan of India, who was forcefully restricted out of school due to this failure in all other subjects other than mathematics. If the personalities were forced to study the curriculum then they could have been demotivated and the world would not have got these personalities.
Hence the nation should require students to study same curriculum for general students but should not be forcefully imposed to them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-first
...important requirement of the society in twenty first century to live a better life education...
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Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...uirement of the society in twenty first century to live a better life education is most...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st path for his future. Secondly, there are many personalities in the world who ...
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'want'
Suggestion: want
...ghly interested in painting and did not wanted to do the formal schooling. In the same...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ould not have got these personalities. Hence the nation should require students to s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as for, for instance, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 351.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79487179487 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74493403709 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524216524217 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5771841365 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306791738476 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922514927851 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139057859102 0.0758088955206 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240821955543 0.150359130593 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16009455759 0.0667264976115 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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