a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
There is no doubt that education is the backbone of a nation. Nation's curriculum should be complete and emphasize though all students can learn details about something which will apply in their curriculum. However, until they enter college, nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum is a contentious one. While each side has its strengths and weaknesses. I believe that, nation curriculum should be same before entering college.
Firstly, if all the students curriculum remain same then they will learn a specific topic together. Their knowledge can be benchmark with same scale. During Public admission or exam government will be beneficial because of same curriculum and less complicated management system.
Likewise, Student quality can be measured with single question paper while selecting intelligent student. For example, in Bangladesh during JSC PSC (public certificate exam) education board make single question paper for all of the student then their mental ability can be measured. If there were several curriculum then it was not possible to do with single management.
Some may argue that, if national curriculum remain same then there will be some drawback regarding this issue. When curriculum is remain that time public exam like admission , student quality benchmark will be same. If by chance question is flashed then education board have to cancel the exam all over the nation that time but it will not happen all time this is a just an accidental premises.
In a nutshell, lot of criteria depending on this issue some of them is mentioned above. So, nation should be require all of its students to learn the identical national curriculum until they enter college.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'required'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, likewise, may, regarding, so, then, while, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 276.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27898550725 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63924349474 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525362318841 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9843717863 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0625 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.480623245156 0.243740707755 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18676530868 0.0831039109588 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.208975615313 0.0758088955206 276% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304914080691 0.150359130593 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.205289902201 0.0667264976115 308% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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