A Nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college

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A Nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college

I strongly belive in Right to Equality,in this case Right to education.Every child must be provided with the same quality of education , irrespective to their location and background

Firstly, Having students being edifying the same curriculum maintain the students with in same levels .All the public and Private schools must have the competent faculty to teach them.Having same syllabus ,but being taught by inefficient faculty worsen the situation.

Secondly,having good infrastructure with a global reach are predominant for the development of student.Extra-circular must be encouraged and students are to be trained with different skills,apart from studies from very small age.

Further ,apart from same curriculum there can be open-electives to choose and groom children with in their interest with a proper guidance by the teachers.

Government must also provide financial support to the students with weak financial background.How come an indigent family can join his children in a extortion school with a national curriculum with such huge prices?Even the curriculum is same it becomes impossible for a child to avail the same education,Without the financial support.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.3162921348 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 33.0505617978 21% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 2235.4752809 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 176.0 442.535393258 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8125 5.05705443957 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 4.55969084622 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47662885493 2.79657885939 124% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 215.323595506 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 704.065955056 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 23.0359550562 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.152036776 60.3974514979 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 255.75 118.986275619 215% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.0 23.4991977007 187% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.75 5.21951772744 302% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164434173659 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966023798771 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342982247651 0.0758088955206 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877580230009 0.150359130593 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478319547137 0.0667264976115 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.9 14.1392134831 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.36 48.8420337079 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 12.1743820225 177% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.31 12.1639044944 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.38706741573 126% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 11.8971910112 265% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 11.2143820225 175% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 11.7820224719 238% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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